Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

[Muhammad Khalil]

:thmbup:

[*Rida*]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
kaam acha ...shair bhi acha .........lakin shair mein ghalti kar di.....:p
2nd line kay baray mein me confuse
rasm-e-ulfat hi ijazat nahin daiti warna
hum bhi aisa tumhain bholain keh sada yaad rehain
isnt it:mm:

[*Hala*]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

haa!! buht khubsurat collection hai.....shair +image+composing.....

[khananiz]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

nice sharing........:thmbup:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

Thanks rida for corection and also hala and khaniz

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

jee tou hum ney kab pucha hai ke yeh kis ke liye hai.
lagta hai chor ki darhi mein tinka hai. :khi:

borders khubsoorat desing kiye hai
shair bhi acha hai.
overall nice work
:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

thanks to all

@ Re. Brez

chaor kee dhari main tinka nahi hy.balky os kee to dhari hay hee nahi

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

thanks to all

@ Re. Brez

chaor kee dhari main tinka nahi hy.balky os kee to dhari hay hee nahi

chalo kabhi tou ho gi na
:khi:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

chaloooooooooooooooooo fair

[jia]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

hmmmmmmmm
amazing bohat acha likha hay

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

thanksoo

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

wah khalil sahib wah kiya baat hai

[Justtaju]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

hahahahah,pehlay hi kah dia kesi k lai nai...

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

mara tum to buhat zalim designing kerrti hai...!
chikki rakho...

[sccorpion81]

Re: Rasam e Ulfat.......yeh kisi k liy nahi hay :P

bhot achi desinging hai bas shair main thori corection hai