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    yey
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    • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

      Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
      Oh ! sorry ...sher acha laga to yahi design kar diya, aaenda khayaal rakhun ga.
      (mein aap ko yay ka sher de dun?)
      Just Mazking :) ..

      nahi miltay tu dhoondh leyti hooN :)


      acha aik sher hai ..na ...

      Meray pass se guzar kar mera haal tak na poocha ..
      yeh mein kesay maan jaaON k wo door jaa k royay ..

      yeh sher kis ka hai ??
      Qasmi sahib ya Parveen shakir?

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      • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

        Originally posted by Gul View Post
        Just Mazking :) ..

        nahi miltay tu dhoondh leyti hooN :)


        acha aik sher hai ..na ...

        Meray pass se guzar kar mera haal tak na poocha ..
        yeh mein kesay maan jaaON k wo door jaa k royay ..

        yeh sher kis ka hai ??
        Qasmi sahib ya Parveen shakir?
        is waqt zehan mein nahin aa raha, mein subah check kar ke bataon ga,


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        • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

          Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
          is waqt zehan mein nahin aa raha, mein subah check kar ke bataon ga,
          Mujhay lagat hai Qasmi sahib ka hai ..!
          anyway ..Mujhay zaroor bataa dijay gaa ! :):jazak:

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          • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

            Originally posted by Gul View Post
            Mujhay lagat hai Qasmi sahib ka hai ..!
            anyway ..Mujhay zaroor bataa dijay gaa ! :):jazak:
            Yeh "saif uddin saif" ki poetry hai
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            • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

              Originally posted by Gul View Post
              yey
              Alif se


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                Hay!
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                    Alif se
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                    • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

                      yay


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                        Magar iss mein wo sher nahi hai !
                        i think last word Roya hai ..

                        :S

                        Meray pass se guzar kar mera haal tak na poocha
                        yeh mein kesay maan jaooN k wo door ja k roya...

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                        • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

                          Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
                          yay


                          DO Chasmi Hay
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                          • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

                            Originally posted by Gul View Post

                            Magar iss mein wo sher nahi hai !
                            i think last word Roya hai ..

                            :S

                            Meray pass se guzar kar mera haal tak na poocha
                            yeh mein kesay maan jaooN k wo door ja k roya...
                            Roya nahin roye hi hai aur yeh isi ghazal ka sher hai.


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                            • Re: Designed Bait Bazi

                              Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
                              Roya nahin roye hi hai aur yeh isi ghazal ka sher hai.

                              Ok!:)
                              Boss Bhai :salam:

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