~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

[Masood]

Merey sarey zang utar do :rose

[Gul]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

Masood jee Aap ki designd poetry daykh kar apnay kahay chand alfaz yaad aa gay ...janay kab aur kis moqa per kahay thay ! waisy ap ka style buhat khoob hay ....and choice bhi ! MAshaAllah!

Mujay OZAN do keh mein likh sakoon,
meray Khiyal Ko ek zameen do
mein wafa kahoon jo jafa na ho
Mujhay aisa Ozan-e-Haseen Do
Meri Chahtoun ko nawaz kar
Meri Olfatoun ko Makeen do
Mujhay Guman say nikal kar
koi Lafz dil nasheen do
Mujhay jamood say raha karo
Koi lehar ek haseen do

[Masood]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

Masood jee Aap ki designd poetry daykh kar apnay kahay chand alfaz yaad aa gay ...janay kab aur kis moqa per kahay thay ! waisy ap ka style buhat khoob hay ....and choice bhi ! MAshaAllah!

Mujay OZAN do keh mein likh sakoon,
meray Khiyal Ko ek zameen do
mein wafa kahoon jo jafa na ho
Mujhay aisa Ozan-e-Haseen Do
Meri Chahtoun ko nawaz kar
Meri Olfatoun ko Makeen do
Mujhay Guman say nikal kar
koi Lafz dil nasheen do
Mujhay jamood say raha karo
Koi lehar ek haseen do

Gul main tumhari shairana soch ka bohat pehley sey qayil hoon magar yeh nazam perh ker wijdaan ko sakoon mila hai - itney pyarey alfaaz sey biyaan karti ho dil ki halaat - dil khush ho jata hai :rose Allah tumhein bohat sari khushiyaan dein - ameen.

[Gul]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

Thanx Masood jee....! yeh abhi incomplete hay ..jald hee paigham ki nazar karoon gee ....! aap ko pasnad aayi meri. ezat afzai hay ! mehrbani aap ki!
Dua k liyay buhat shukriya...Allah taalah aap ko khushiyun say nawazay aameen

[Wafa]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

bohot ache shair hai...aur aap ke designing bhi bohot khoob........:thmbup: :D:

[Masood]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

bohot ache shair hai...aur aap ke designing bhi bohot khoob........:thmbup: :D:

Thnks Wafa - khush raho :rose

[shakeeel]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

zabardast bhai

[fari]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

nice one uncle

[*Rida*]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
bhai ...............buht khooob

ALLAH aap ko khush rakhay....

[*Rida*]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

Masood jee Aap ki designd poetry daykh kar apnay kahay chand alfaz yaad aa gay ...janay kab aur kis moqa per kahay thay ! waisy ap ka style buhat khoob hay ....and choice bhi ! MAshaAllah!

Mujay OZAN do keh mein likh sakoon,
meray Khiyal Ko ek zameen do
mein wafa kahoon jo jafa na ho
Mujhay aisa Ozan-e-Haseen Do
Meri Chahtoun ko nawaz kar
Meri Olfatoun ko Makeen do
Mujhay Guman say nikal kar
koi Lafz dil nasheen do
Mujhay jamood say raha karo
Koi lehar ek haseen do

Gul ji
count me as ur fan......:blush:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

boht khoob ji:zuban:

[Shaheen]

Re: ~*~Merey Sarey Zang Utar Do~*~

boht khoob Masood bhai ..nice