Hajoom-e-Ghum

[fari]

Assalam-o-Alikum!!!!:salam:

My another try :wk

[Mrs.Khan]

Re: Hajoon-e-Ghum

Superb :phool:
but ye larki muskura to nahi rahi shayad :)

[Hamsafar]

Re: Hajoon-e-Ghum

NIce one:rose

Border Bohat khubsurat banaya hia

i love it

thanks for shaiiring:ff:

[shakeeel]

Re: Hajoon-e-Ghum

very nice

[*Rida*]

Re: Hajoon-e-Ghum

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

verryyy niceeeeeee

[Masood]

Re: Hajoon-e-Ghum

very nice fari

Main agar mughalta nahin khaa raha to is shair ki doosri line kuchh yun hai:

hajoom-e-gham meri fitrat badal nahin sakta
KYA KAROON MUJHEY AADAT HAI MUSKRANEY KI

[fari]

Re: Hajoon-e-Ghum

very nice fari

Main agar mughalta nahin khaa raha to is shair ki doosri line kuchh yun hai:

hajoom-e-gham meri fitrat badal nahin sakta
KYA KAROON MUJHEY AADAT HAI MUSKRANEY KI

Masood bhai thanko islah karnay ka liya .......:salam:
Samjh arha ha na shair ki yahi kafi ha:khi: ........... Aienda sahi check kar kay likhon g:salam:


Aur baqi sab ka bhi shukriya:phool: ....ya larki muskra rhai ha tanziya Ms khan .Approximately:khi:

[Karb]

Re: Hajoom-e-Ghum

Nice work...:)

[Wafa]

Re: Hajoom-e-Ghum

frame bohot ache hai aur shair bhi bohot he zabardast mughe bohot pasand aaya.......:rose