~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

[Masood]

Aik Shair

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

buuhat ala

[*Rida*]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardsat qita tha....agar nibah ko "binah" na likha hota :p

composing aur colors buht achay hain:)

[Masood]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Ab dekho jaa ker NIBAAH hi likha hai :p

[Mrs.Khan]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Wah Kiaa bat hai Boht Aalaa :phool:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Adaab!!!!
Ahan bohat khoob ..:) :rose itni achhi composing kertay hain ..aur chhupay baythay rehtay hain ..:fuming:

[Wafa]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

wah masood ji aaj kal bohot hi ache designing kar rahe hai........good hi good...:clap:

[MuQadas]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

wah kia log hain yahan aur kia zabar10 likhtay hain bohat umda

[fari]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Adaab!!!!
Ahan bohat khoob ..:) :rose itni achhi composing kertay hain ..aur chhupay baythay rehtay hain ..:fuming:

:kr: ya shutarmuri tarhan chuoay bathay hain ...Esha jee

@topic
bohat zabrdast Qita ha:salam:

[*Rida*]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Ab dekho jaa ker NIBAAH hi likha hai :p

ohhhhooo mairi aankhoon ka qosoor hai janab.......yaqeenan buht khobsorat qita hai

[Aania]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

mistake : 3rd line ... "gey" comin at the end ... u wrote probably in rush .. >> "key" rest is nice ... choice of poetry n image.. keep workin ... U r improvin man .. goody good :)

[Hamsafar]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

Galti to bata de hai

bohat umda shiaring

bohat ala jeee

[shakeeel]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

bohat acha she'r aur aal'a composing.
(GHalti nikalna to hamari duty hai na jee)

[jugnoo217]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

very nicely done janab

leken lagta hai apke frames magneted hotay hain, text ko apne sathi chipka lete hain :shy6:

[Masood]

Re: ~*~ Janey Waley ~*~

bohat acha she'r aur aal'a composing.
(GHalti nikalna to hamari duty hai na jee)

Ji ghalti ka andaza usi waqt ho geya tha magar susti :D