Alaag

[fari]

Assalam-o-ALikum!!!!:salam:

Maina aik aur shair try kiya:wk ..........app sab meri galtiyon se mujhay agaha karen aur sath mai achi changes ka baray mai bhi batiya:phool: :rose :rose

[Hamsafar]

Re: Alaag

Salam :rose

boaht achi try hai

magar aap borders par tajwa do thori si

baqi mare kial main sab theeeeeek hai :rose

boaht acha hai

2 kilo jalibian qaboooool karian

[Yaaram]

Re: Alaag

fari bohat acha banaya hay
imla ki galtyan door karo :) gila aise nahi hota ......aakhir main alif aata hay
baqi inpage main se jab le ke aati ho to Alignment ka khas khayal rakha karo :) baqi sab theek hay .....aur han borders ki taraf bh tawajo do :)

[shakeeel]

Re: Alaag

Kaha tha kis ne ke ahd-e-wafa karo uss se
jo yooN Kia hei to pHir kiyuN gila karo uss se
Faraz tark-e-taulaq to kher Kia hoga
yahi buhat hei ke kam kam mila karo uss se

gila aise nahi hota ......aakhir main alif aata hay

mere khayal mein gila alif se nahin hota, Fari ne theek likha hai....
lekin "gila kesey nahin hai shayed, yeh is tarah se hai " Akailey pan ki azziyat ka ab gila kesa"
Baharhaal koshish achi hai, keep it up

[*Rida*]

Re: Alaag

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

Shakeel bhai nay bata diya hai :D
main keh rahi thi keh .....inpage main justify alignment hoti hai....ashaar aur ghazal kay liye woh tareeqa zyada behter rehta hai :)
text bilkul wazeh hai ...aur borders kay liye jo tum nay white main effect diya hai naa....mujhay buht acha laga....aur acha aur prominent lagta agar color kuch aur hota :D:

[fari]

Re: Alaag

Salam :rose

boaht achi try hai

magar aap borders par tajwa do thori si

baqi mare kial main sab theeeeeek hai :rose

boaht acha hai

2 kilo jalibian qaboooool karian

:salam: Thankyou jee hum border per gor kartay hai

fari bohat acha banaya hay
imla ki galtyan door karo :) gila aise nahi hota ......aakhir main alif aata hay
baqi inpage main se jab le ke aati ho to Alignment ka khas khayal rakha karo :) baqi sab theek hay .....aur han borders ki taraf bh tawajo do :)

:blush: thank you Yaaram bhai for guiding me:salam:

[Masood]

Re: Alaag

Nice work fari - bas in buzurgon (mujhey nikaal ker) ki baton per amal karti jao master ban jao gi :)

[Hamsafar]

Re: Alaag

Fari jee aap ne gila theeeek likha hai never cahnge:rose

[fari]

Re: Alaag

Kaha tha kis ne ke ahd-e-wafa karo uss se
jo yooN Kia hei to pHir kiyuN gila karo uss se
Faraz tark-e-taulaq to kher Kia hoga
yahi buhat hei ke kam kam mila karo uss se



mere khayal mein gila alif se nahin hota, Fari ne theek likha hai....
lekin "gila kesey nahin hai shayed, yeh is tarah se hai " Akailey pan ki azziyat ka ab gila kesa"
Baharhaal koshish achi hai, keep it up

:salam: app ki batai hoi galti abb durust karti hon Thankyou:phool:

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose

Shakeel bhai nay bata diya hai :D
main keh rahi thi keh .....inpage main justify alignment hoti hai....ashaar aur ghazal kay liye woh tareeqa zyada behter rehta hai :)
text bilkul wazeh hai ...aur borders kay liye jo tum nay white main effect diya hai naa....mujhay buht acha laga....aur acha aur prominent lagta agar color kuch aur hota :D:

:rose shukriya Rida apni rayi dena ka........I will try it to make it better:rose :wk

[fari]

Re: Alaag

Nice work fari - bas in buzurgon (mujhey nikaal ker) ki baton per amal karti jao master ban jao gi :)

Sarhanay ka liya shukriya Uncle:salam: :wk app buzurg nahi hosaktay app tu buzurgo kay bhi buzurg hain:kr: :kr:

[Wafa]

Re: Alaag

bohot hi ache designing lage.....rida ne jaise bataya ke justify ailment use karo....ye border acha lag raha hai....pegham.com thoora mit gaya hai....lastly fari nahi likha tum ne image me.....:phool:

[fari]

Re: Alaag

maina app logo ki suggestion ka baad dobara banaya .........zara check karen:salam:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Alaag

maina app logo ki suggestion ka baad dobara banaya .........zara check karen:salam:

ahan thts nice na chanda:hug:shakeel bhai ney sahi kaha k gila word sahi likha hay aap ney :)

[fari]

Re: Alaag

ahan thts nice na chanda:hug:shakeel bhai ney sahi kaha k gila word sahi likha hay aap ney :)

:hug:Thank you de ......:phool:

[jugnoo217]

Re: Alaag

nice attempt, hope to see more with improvement, it comes by going further :)