aik shair

[Khushi]

aik shair bhot arsa pehle compose kiya tha jab es bare mein kuch khas practice nahi thi...

[Masood]

Re: aik shair

Bohat khoobsurat Khushi - aur i like your penguine :lol

[Khushi]

Re: aik shair

bhot shukriya :rose

aur dono mein se kon sa penguine aap ko pasand aaya :D:

[Masood]

Re: aik shair

woh jo peechey kharey dekh rahey hain keh tamasha honey wala hai :D

[*Rida*]

Re: aik shair

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose


buht buht zabardsat

khushi plzz aati jaati raha kijiyee ..... main aap ko buht miss karti hoon ....
aap tu bilkul hi ghayeb ho jati hain ... yaqeen kijiye in dinoon main buht dil say aap ko yaad kar rahi thi :phool:

aur haan yeh penguines dekh kar tu chotay bhai ko bhi maza agaya :kr:

[fari]

Re: aik shair

app ka pegunie waqii bohat mazay ka hai

Aur ap ka shair ka intakhab bhi khoob ha :clap:

[ADNAN.S]

Re: aik shair

gud......

[Aania]

Re: aik shair

nice try :)

[Khushi]

Re: aik shair

woh jo peechey kharey dekh rahey hain keh tamasha honey wala hai :D

han tou baat ye hai k jab tak spectators na hun..maza nahi aata na :kr:

[Khushi]

Re: aik shair

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose


buht buht zabardsat

khushi plzz aati jaati raha kijiyee ..... main aap ko buht miss karti hoon ....
aap tu bilkul hi ghayeb ho jati hain ... yaqeen kijiye in dinoon main buht dil say aap ko yaad kar rahi thi :phool:

aur haan yeh penguines dekh kar tu chotay bhai ko bhi maza agaya :kr:

thankz Rida.Infact zara busy thi last days aur phir sab se bari baat k yahan aa ker urdu composing ka shoq dobara jag jata hai jis k liye time ka hona zaroori hai:)
baherhal Insha'Allah chaker lagta rahe ga aur bhot shukria yaadon mein jaga dene ka..you cant imagine k aap ka ye msg perr ker mujhe kitni khushi hui thankz a lot:rose
Khush rahye:)

[Khushi]

Re: aik shair

thnkz a lot Fari,Alone in Love and Aania

[Masood]

Re: aik shair

han tou baat ye hai k jab tak spectators na hun..maza nahi aata na :kr:

suna tha keh Ghalib key urrein gey purzey
ham bhi dekhney gaey per tamasha na huwa :lol

[Khushi]

Re: aik shair

suna tha keh Ghalib key urrein gey purzey
ham bhi dekhney gaey per tamasha na huwa :lol

Ghalib ka tou pata nahi lakin mere Penguine tou apna kaam poora poora ker rahe hein:kr:

[Masood]

Re: aik shair

Ghalib ka tou pata nahi lakin mere Penguine tou apna kaam poora poora ker rahe hein:kr:

Chacha Ghalib ka kaam bhi ho chuka hai magar aap key penguine to bohat hi cute sey hain - itna pyar aata hai - penguine per :kr:

[Khushi]

Re: aik shair

Chacha Ghalib ka kaam bhi ho chuka hai magar aap key penguine to bohat hi cute sey hain - itna pyar aata hai - penguine per :kr:

lolzzzz yahan phir wohi sawal ata hai k " kon se penguine per":kr: