crying eyes ki farmaesh

[shakeeel]

:)

[shakeeel]

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:rose

[shakeeel]

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rose

[shakeeel]

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:):)

[Gul]

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BUhat hee khoobsoorat ....Jin ki demand hai onn se pehlay mein nay deykh leen aap ki posted ...EFFORTS ...So NICE as usuall..! :)

[*Hijab*]

Re: crying eyes ki farmaesh

Asalamo-Alekam, hamari bhi aik adna si koshish:blush:

[Gul]

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Go k koi khas nahi but kuch try mein nay b kia .bulkeh u keh lijay k
DIL nay kahaa kion yeh nazam mujhay dil ko chooti hoi c lagi!
Shakeel Bhai se .buhat respect k sath ...! K aap zaroor comment karein !

[Gul]

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[Gul]

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[Gul]

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[shakeeel]

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bohat acha banaya hai Sadia ... welldone

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[shakeeel]

Re: crying eyes ki farmaesh

Go k koi khas nahi but kuch try mein nay b kia .bulkeh u keh lijay k
DIL nay kahaa kion yeh nazam mujhay dil ko chooti hoi c lagi!
Shakeel Bhai se .buhat respect k sath ...! K aap zaroor comment karein !

WOW, Aap ne bohat khoobsurti se yeh nazam design ki hai.... really its beautiful. shaam ki image mein larki ki image ki mixing zabardast hai. mein bhi chah raha tha k larki ki hi image use karun lekin shair ko dekhtey huey nahin ki.

[Gul]

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Actually mein nay is poem ko female ki nigah se liya ! :)
Thanx Alot for ur comments ...! khush rahiyay!

[crying eyes]

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wonderful such a beautiful

Thanx a lot Shakeel Bhai ,Gul and Sadia jii .....

mere pass alfaz nahi hain kahne k liye

[crying eyes]

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Main yahan aap ko ye bataati chalon k
main aap sab (pegham) se

Naaraazgii kaa izhar kerne waali thi lekin
ab ye dekh kar Bahut hee khushi huwii main sab ki mashkoor hoon Tah-e-dil se....

Agar shaair ka naam saath main likhte to ziyada acha hota

Main aap logon ko bata nahi sakti k y DUAA mujhe kis qadar pasand hai


Once again thank u soooo much (Shakeel bhai,Sadia and Gul jii)