~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

[shy]

:)

[shy]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

is tasweer par apni pasand ki shairi likheay :)

[Yaaram]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

hmmmmmmmm Bohat Zabardast shy.Umeed hai ke sab log is main hissa lein ge ......main bhi loon ga lekan koi ghazal to final kar loon image hi aisa hay baara hard ho ga Shaairi muntakhib karna :)

[Masood]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

Shy ji silsila to bohat hi umdah hai magar mera mashwra hai keh iska time barha dijiye aur aik maah ka kar dijiye.

yeh lijiye mera intikhab is picture key liye:

[shy]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

hmmmmmmmm Bohat Zabardast shy.Umeed hai ke sab log is main hissa lein ge ......main bhi loon ga lekan koi ghazal to final kar loon image hi aisa hay baara hard ho ga Shaairi muntakhib karna :)

g hard to ho ga par dilchasp bhi ho ga :)

[shy]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

Shy ji silsila to bohat hi umdah hai magar mera mashwra hai keh iska time barha dijiye aur aik maah ka kar dijiye.

yeh lijiye mera intikhab is picture key liye:

g theek he aap ke mashware par amal karte huey 1 month time rakh lete hen,or aap ka sher bohat acha he leikn aap use pic par likhen.

[Yaaram]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

Shy ji silsila to bohat hi umdah hai magar mera mashwra hai keh iska time barha dijiye aur aik maah ka kar dijiye.

yeh lijiye mera intikhab is picture key liye:

jee theek hay ......:)

[Yaaram]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

aik aam se koshish :)

[.]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

chaloo ji ham bhi pounch gay is baar waqat pay :eye:



agar pic main koi tabdeeli karna hoo to woh allowed hai ya nahi ? :rose

[handsome]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

JAld hi kuch share karo ga :)

[Sagheer]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

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[Yaaram]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

Sagheer jee shar to bohat acha hay lekan is main nazm ya Ghazal likhni hay shar nahi
Hope u dont mind :)

[Fatima Asad]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

aslaam_u_alikam


bohat khub tasveer ka intikhaab kiya hey aap ney.
is tasveer main darakht key gird jo khamoshi mehsoos ho rahi hey us ko dekhtey hi mujhey pani yeh nazm yaad aagii. mujhey nahin pataa keh meri yeh nazm is tasveer per kitni puri utartii hey phir bhi share kerna chaahon gii.

Gumnaam sa sanaataa hey chaaron aur merey
ik anjaanaa sa der hey dil ki gehraaiyun main
terey honey ka tasavur ya
terey kho jaaney ka gum
jaaney kiya cheez hey
jis ney neendein churaaien hain
kaash
tum samjh saktey
shukriya

[Yaaram]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

Bohat pyari nazm hay :)

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~*~Shairi@Tasweer~*~mukabla 1

its me:eye: