AgNi SaNsKaAr

[WASI ANJUM]

Ye Afsana mene 2001 mein likha tha shaya bhi ho chuka hai
socha yahan aap sab k saath bhi share karoon

[WASI ANJUM]

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[Pakiza]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

iss daur ki talkh haqeeqaton kis kadar sachi akasi ki hai
zabardas

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

iss daur ki talkh haqeeqaton kis kadar sachi akasi ki hai
zabardas

Pasand karne ka bahot shukriya Pakiza :rose

[*Hijab*]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

Assalamo-Alekam!
haqeeqton ko choti choti baton mein keh janay ka hunar hai aap kay pass. aap ki kahani mein jo aik aur point hai mere khiyal mein, woh yeh hai kay aik insan chahhay kitna he naik fitrat aur naram dil kyon na ho.....zindagi kay kahin rukh aisay hotay hein jo us ka nazriya badal daitay hein
bohat acha likha hai aap nay........aainda bhi hamaray saath share kartay rahiye ga...:)

[WASI ANJUM]

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Assalamo-Alekam!
haqeeqton ko choti choti baton mein keh janay ka hunar hai aap kay pass. aap ki kahani mein jo aik aur point hai mere khiyal mein, woh yeh hai kay aik insan chahhay kitna he naik fitrat aur naram dil kyon na ho.....zindagi kay kahin rukh aisay hotay hein jo us ka nazriya badal daitay hein
bohat acha likha hai aap nay........aainda bhi hamaray saath share kartay rahiye ga...:)

Walekum Asslam :)

Bahoot shukriya pasand karne ka Hijab:rose
Insaan ko jab apni majbooriyan yaad aati hain aur apni khuwaishen poori
hoti hui nazar aati hain to woh doosroon ko bhool jata hai usay kisi ka ehsaas nahi rehta bas apna matlab he yaad rehta hai

[zmufti]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

wasi saheb
aap ki kahani aik achii koshish hai
likhte rahiye

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

Bahoot shukriya Zarqa:rose

[shummu]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

acchi kahani hai...

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

acchi kahani hai...

Shukriya shummu:rose

[Aabehayat]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

AsSaLam aLaiKUm..
aApkA aFsAnA paRhA,,aAp ne bOhaT tAlkH haQeEqAt kO jiS andAz sE liKha bOhAt aCha lagA maGar sAtH afSos bHi hUa ...bOhAT si dAad qUbOoL kiJIyE...isi tArha LikhTay rahIye...:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

Pasand karne ka bahoot bahoot shukriya Golden eye
aap bhi bahoot achha likhti hain
aap ki next sharing ka intazzar rahega

[Afroze]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

kush afsana kuch haqeeqat..yahi life ha..
bhot acha lekha ha ap ny

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

Bahoot bahoot shukriya Afroze

[Mr.Khan]

Re: AgNi SaNsKaAr

Jahaiz ek la'anat hai......Ma'ashray ki jahalat ko buhat achay se aap ne apnay afsaanay me samoya hai
buhat acha likhte hain aap :rose