!!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

[ahsaas]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

thankss Ahsaas
aap bhi apni jagah sahi keh rahi hain
aap ne to lajawab kar diya.......mere paas koi jawab nahi ban pa raha:)????????

U r welcome Wasii..
kuch sawalon k jawab nahin hoty ..woh aisey sawal hoty hein jo apny ap mein mukamal hoty hein
next ka wait rahy ga:)

[Life is Alone]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

bohat zaberdasttt wasiiii...bohat achaa or dukhi likhaaa....khubsoorat ilfaz istamal kiye...per likha baray dard main...:)

bass bohat acha likha..:)

likhtay rhaiyee..

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

bohat zaberdasttt wasiiii...bohat achaa or dukhi likhaaa....khubsoorat ilfaz istamal kiye...per likha baray dard main...:)

bass bohat acha likha..:)

likhtay rhaiyee..

thankx Ambreen:rose
aap k khoobsurat cooments ka bahoot bahoot shukriya

[Nokia_Afridi]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

hemmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

tu jenab na

Eslay Shal ka Desmber ka zeker kya hay :salam:

ur Greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttt bohat umda...

wasi bhii

[WASI ANJUM]

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Thankss Nokia_Afridi

[zapk]

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Wasi bohat sachi kahani likhi hai.Is tarah ki kahanian shaid hamaray ird gird nazar aa jati hain laikin ham un per tawajoh nahin daitay.Tum ne bohat achay andaaz se isay present kiya hai.:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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thankss zaPK7
bahoot bahoot shukriya

[Gul]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

Jab kahani hee Sachaaii k gird ghoomti ho tu hamar qalam pooray jazbat ko ossi
tarah se refelect karta hai jis tarah se k wo dil mein houn.....
Aap ki nasar mein b mujhay aap ki poetry ki shabeeh hee dikhaai dee
jiss mein ek khilay Phool sa DARD hai jo haseen b hai
aur kabhi kabhi ...kasak b deyta hai ...!
VERY IMPRESSIVE WAY OF EXPRESSING .....!:thmbup:

[WASI ANJUM]

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Jab kahani hee Sachaaii k gird ghoomti ho tu hamar qalam pooray jazbat ko ossi

tarah se refelect karta hai jis tarah se k wo dil mein houn.....
Aap ki nasar mein b mujhay aap ki poetry ki shabeeh hee dikhaai dee
jiss mein ek khilay Phool sa DARD hai jo haseen b hai
aur kabhi kabhi ...kasak b deyta hai ...!

VERY IMPRESSIVE WAY OF EXPRESSING .....!:thmbup:

bahoot bahoot shukriya Gul
really aap k comments bare khoobsurat hotay hain
aap k her comments mein koi nai cheez parhne ko milti hai:)

[hasnain]

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nice story ur reaaly deserverd writter of the month

[Pakiza]

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wah bahut umdah Wasi bhai
bahut acha likha hai app ne
really dukh ke jazbat ko bayan karna aasan kaam nahi hai
par app ne ye bahut achi tarhan kar dekhaya hai

zabardas

[La'hasil]

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Buhat Khoobsurat Tehreer Daad Qabool Kijye :rose

Khush Rahiye

[J.KHAN]

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wasi ye sab kiya sach hai aap ki sab kahaniyon mein dukh he kiyon hota hai
kabhi to koi khushi bhi likha karo

[WASI ANJUM]

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nice story ur reaaly deserverd writter of the month

thanx alot hasnain sahib:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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wah bahut umdah Wasi bhai
bahut acha likha hai app ne
really dukh ke jazbat ko bayan karna aasan kaam nahi hai
par app ne ye bahut achi tarhan kar dekhaya hai

zabardas

shukriya Pakiza k aap meri threads ko parhti hain aur
un per apnay khoobsurat comments bhi deti hain:rose
khushiyon k muqabilay mein dukh likhna aasan
lagta hai mujhe