!!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

[WASI ANJUM]

:rose

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

bohat khubsoorat likha hai aap ney wasi anjum

kahani bohat sad hai magar phir bhi read karney mein bohat mazza aaya hai.:thmbup:

keep writing & sharing :rose

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

wooooooooowww...zaberdast lhika hai ap nay............apnay ap ko ilfazon main dhalna buhat mushkil hota hai...but ap nay sach main buhat acha lhika hai.....



Khush rahiye....:rose :rose


waisay sachi ap ki kahani hai kaya...:-s

[Wafa]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

waah........bohot he acha likha hai wasi.........aap ke tehreer mai bohot dard tha.......i think akser aisa hota hai.....kisi aik ke raahein juda ho jati hai aur dosra wahi ka wahi khara rehta hai......bt waqt nahi rukhta bass ham pechay reh jatay hai......is leya agay barhna chaheye.....:)

[lucky]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

very sad story:(

[ahsaas]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

:rose

aik bar phir sey ap ny lafzon ko zuban di hai aur inko aisey samita hai k unki ijtamayat ney khushi sy ley ker ghum tak ko aayaan ker diya
mager hamein yahan yakterfa dard nahin bulky dono taraf dard hi dikhai diya .
jo chor ker gai ..us ki chahat tou rasmi zanjeeron mein jakrii thi ..usy bhi her rishty ka haq ada kerna tha jo is rishty sy pahly wajood mein aye..yaqeenan woh bhi nahin bhooli hogi ..aur us ny bhi kitny kaghaz siahi se bhare hon gey.


Wasii..Its really very nice ..keep it up:)

[jia]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

very nice WASI :em:
bohat he zabardast likha hay app nay
likhty rhain or humary sath share krty rhain:)
kahani k ilawa app nay jo shair likah hay us main
sari kahani simat kr samny aa jati hay...
very nice
b happy:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

bohat khubsoorat likha hai aap ney wasi anjum

kahani bohat sad hai magar phir bhi read karney mein bohat mazza aaya hai.:thmbup:

keep writing & sharing :rose

thankss RB
Parhna bahoot aasan hota hai lekinmaza tab aai ga jab us dard ko mehsoos bhi kiya jai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

wooooooooowww...zaberdast lhika hai ap nay............apnay ap ko ilfazon main dhalna buhat mushkil hota hai...but ap nay sach main buhat acha lhika hai.....



Khush rahiye....:rose :rose


waisay sachi ap ki kahani hai kaya...:-s

bahoot bahoot shukriya Shakh-e-Tamana
ye her us shakhs ki kahani hai jis ka piyar rasmoon rawajoon k haathoon loota gaya hai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

waah........bohot he acha likha hai wasi.........aap ke tehreer mai bohot dard tha.......i think akser aisa hota hai.....kisi aik ke raahein juda ho jati hai aur dosra wahi ka wahi khara rehta hai......bt waqt nahi rukhta bass ham pechay reh jatay hai......is leya agay barhna chaheye.....:)

thanx wafa

hum aaj tak khare hain ussi morr per
jahan tum juda huay thay saath chhor kar

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

very sad story:(

thankss Lucky
jo tha share kar diya

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

aik bar phir sey ap ny lafzon ko zuban di hai aur inko aisey samita hai k unki ijtamayat ney khushi sy ley ker ghum tak ko aayaan ker diya
mager hamein yahan yakterfa dard nahin bulky dono taraf dard hi dikhai diya .
jo chor ker gai ..us ki chahat tou rasmi zanjeeron mein jakrii thi ..usy bhi her rishty ka haq ada kerna tha jo is rishty sy pahly wajood mein aye..yaqeenan woh bhi nahin bhooli hogi ..aur us ny bhi kitny kaghaz siahi se bhare hon gey.


Wasii..Its really very nice ..keep it up:)

thankss Ahsaas
aap bhi apni jagah sahi keh rahi hain
aap ne to lajawab kar diya.......mere paas koi jawab nahi ban pa raha:)????????

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

very nice WASI :em:
bohat he zabardast likha hay app nay
likhty rhain or humary sath share krty rhain:)
kahani k ilawa app nay jo shair likah hay us main
sari kahani simat kr samny aa jati hay...
very nice
b happy:rose

shukriya Jia
InshaAllah likhta rahoonga
thanks 4 comments

[KurriPunjaban]

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intersting...............

[khananiz]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

waah........buhat he acha likha hai wasi aap n aap ki har baat m dard hai ..........:)