!!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

[WASI ANJUM]

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Buhat Khoobsurat Tehreer Daad Qabool Kijye :rose

Khush Rahiye

Shukriya La hasil sahib :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: !!!!....Mere Dard ki Kahani....!!!!

wasi ye sab kiya sach hai aap ki sab kahaniyon mein dukh he kiyon hota hai
kabhi to koi khushi bhi likha karo

likhoon ga khushiyon per bhi waqat aanay per :rose
thanx khan sahib:)

[*Hijab*]

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hamesha ki taran..great:)
bohat he khubsurat likha hai aap ne, well, I agree ke log jin say payar kertey hein woh bichar jayen tou dukh hota hai, lekin hamein yeh bhi sochna chaiye ke....hamarey dukhi honey say woh log jo hum say payar kertey hein woh kitney dukhi hon gey.....
zindagi ko her hall mein hansi khushi guzar dena chaiye:)

[WASI ANJUM]

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hamesha ki taran..great:)
bohat he khubsurat likha hai aap ne, well, I agree ke log jin say payar kertey hein woh bichar jayen tou dukh hota hai, lekin hamein yeh bhi sochna chaiye ke....hamarey dukhi honey say woh log jo hum say payar kertey hein woh kitney dukhi hon gey.....
zindagi ko her hall mein hansi khushi guzar dena chaiye:)

Thanx Sadia :rose
aap k comments hamehsa khobsurat hotay hain
I agree with u bilkul sahi kaha aap ne......apne dukhon se kisi ko
kiyon uddas kiya jai her pal khushiyan baantni chahiyen :)

[Roshan-ali]

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wasi uncle plz atany dukh bary kany kyio lakhty hoo
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeee
dosro ke khatar atna sochana acha nai hoga

[Rosy]

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Assalamualikum,

Aap tu itna accha likhtay hain dil ko chu leti hain aap ki tahreerain,

aap ki tahreeroon main bahut gahraee hoti hai bahut accha likhtay hain,

bahut khoob,

Kush rahain:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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wasi uncle plz atany dukh bary kany kyio lakhty hoo
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeee
dosro ke khatar atna sochana acha nai hoga

Shukriya roshan Ali:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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Assalamualikum,

Aap tu itna accha likhtay hain dil ko chu leti hain aap ki tahreerain,

aap ki tahreeroon main bahut gahraee hoti hai bahut accha likhtay hain,

bahut khoob,

Kush rahain:rose

Bahoot bahoo shukriya rosy pasand karne ka :rose

[Roshan-ali]

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agan nice bahoot janab
such a niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Roshan-ali]

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agan nice bahoot khoob janab
such a niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[WASI ANJUM]

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Shukriya Roshan Ali

[milestone]

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2nd image ki kuch batein ....

1st aap ne jahan se tahreer shuru ki hai wahan aap ka Muqatin " wahid " nahi hai . phir aap ne ek jumle mein " wahid " ko istemaal kia hai .
aur yeh ek sentence ke " ansoo " shareer bache ki tarha .... Mita detey hain .is ke liye :clap:yehhhhh
last mein jo share hai shayed yeh aap ka nahi hai .

[WASI ANJUM]

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Shukriya aap ka tanqeed sar aankhon per
ji last shair mera nahi hai kisi aur poet ka hai