Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

[Masood]

Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat - merey bikhrey huwey qalam ki shayid aakhri tehreer hai

Is kahani key depth ko samajhney key liyey yeh 2 kahaniyaan parhni zaroori hain...

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php...Ik-Shaair-Hoon
http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php...Raddi-Ki-Tokri

[Masood]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

Uskey dil per bhi karri ishq mein guzri ho gi
naam jis ney bhi muhabbat ka saza rakha hai

[Masood]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

aey ishq hamein barbaad na kar
ham bhooley huwoun ko yaad na kar

[AbgeenA]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

bohat khoob

[ummid]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

accha likha hai... bauaht khooob.... :rose

[Z.]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat - merey bikhrey huwey qalam ki shayid aakhri tehreer hai :)

achi tehreer hai, filhaal merey pass lafz nahi :rose

bas itna k issey akhri nahi hona chahiye ! :thmbup:

[Admin]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

bas itna k issey akhri nahi hona chahiye !

Masood key behalf iska jawab main dey deta hoon :lol

Zinia main ney jab bhi likha hai, DIL sey likha hai aur woh likha hai jo merey DIL ney likhwaya hai - jab DIL hi doob raha ho to tehreerein kahan sey aaein gi sis? :)

Yeh aik pukar hai. Dekho kya rang lati hai.

[Nadia khan]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

aey ishq hamein barbaad na kar
ham bhooley huwoun ko yaad na kar

bahut hi umda tehreer hen :rose

[saraah]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

samjh se baahir hai kya kahoon ,mohabbat ki ek esi hi kahani ki talash thi muje ......kaash dil ki jeet hojaya kray hamesha ......!

dil se likhi gayi tehreer hai :rose

khush rahain

[Ehsaas786]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

BUHUT OMDA TEHREER ..

Waqi kisi nay Sahi kahaa hay ...
muhubbat ,, wahi ki trah muhubbat k liye bhi qudrat makhsoos dilon ka intekhab krti hay ju
apni hassasiyat mn kisi be had nafees or nihayat qeemti shay ki trah nazuk huty hn magr ...
bardasht k liye himala ka jigr rakhty hen ... buhut khush rahiyye ..

[Passionaire]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

bohut umdah aur sada tehreer hai.........Ishq e haqeeqi ki janib bhi acha ishara hai...aap ki line yaani Khuda ki Pehchaan bhi Dil sai hoti hai aur Mohabbat bhi Dil sai hoti hai...bohut hee khoob line hai.... bohut khoob :) daad wsool krein...

[BANJARAH]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

Funtastic
Out Class

[Pakiza]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat - merey bikhrey huwey qalam ki shayid aakhri tehreer hai

Is kahani key depth ko samajhney key liyey yeh 2 kahaniyaan parhni zaroori hain...

http://www.pegham.com/masood01/789-m...aair-hoon.html

http://www.pegham.com/masood01/12868...-ki-tokri.html

Assalam O Alaikum
Masood bhai ye dono links kaam nai kar rahey
apki kahi baat pe ghor karty huey main ye dono links pehley dekhna chahungi iss post ko parhne se pehley

[Pakiza]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

speachless bahut khub likha hai apne waqai muhabbat jo ek asa jazba hai jis ko define karna bahut mushkil hai apne bahut khubsoorti se bayan kia hai haqiqat hai ke agar muhabbat nai hoti tu hum apne Rab-e-Kareem ko kesey pehchanty
bahut khub apne tu lajawab kar diya

iss tehreer ko parh ke lagata hia ke ab likhney waley ke pass kuch or likhney ki hasrat hi nai rahi likin Masood bhai apki tehreerain bahut achi or soch ko mutaharrik karne wali hoti hain main dua karti hoon ke ye apki akhri tehreer na ho or hum sab ko apke qalam se mazeed achi achi baatain parhne ko milain AMEEN

[Areeba]

Re: Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat

Yeh Jazbah-e-Muhabbat - merey bikhrey huwey qalam ki shayid aakhri tehreer hai

Is kahani key depth ko samajhney key liyey yeh 2 kahaniyaan parhni zaroori hain...

http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php...Ik-Shaair-Hoon
http://www.pegham.com/showthread.php...Raddi-Ki-Tokri

bohat zabardast bohat Alaa