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Aik Tehreer .... 24062006
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tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lagey -
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wah bhai....kia baat keh dali hay....
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mashoooooom bachey, achha likhty ho
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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht achi tehreer hai :(
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:) :roseOriginally posted by Khalil
Nawazish ji pazeerai kiOriginally posted by baad-e-saba
to ismein aisa munh bnaney wali kiya baat hai :DOriginally posted by RidaAssalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht achi tehreer hai :(
tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lageyComment
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bohat hi achi tahreer ha !!!!
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AAP ki yeh tehreer parh kar ....baysakhta ek muskarahat aa gai ..chehray per.. kitnay khoobsoorat andaz mein aap nay Oss dard ko likha jo keh SARMAD shayd kabhi na keh sakay :) ....yehan sab hee likhtay hein ...kuch na kuch ...koi sirf khat likhta hay ..meboob ko ...dost ko...magar address nahi maloom....khoajnay ki koshish b nahi karta wo oss ka address kyun k wo jo likhna chahta tha wo tu likh diya...Mehboob tak dil ki sadaa hee puhnchay gee ..KHAT nahi....han isss say RADDI walay ki rozi bani rahay gee..aur OSS likhnay walay ka likhnay ka silsala bhi chalta rahay gaa............Buhat gehri soach.............VERY NICE!Originally posted by Masood View PostComment
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