TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

[aquari]

:salam:Buaht dinoo main kuch likha haii...!I hope is bar bhi sub k acha lagey..:blush:

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

kuchh paanay k liyee kuchh khhona pardta hai,laikin baaz auqaat bohot kuchh paa leney k baawajood bhi aik tashnagi rehti hai,kisi ko piar ki kisi ko daolat ki,agar zindagi ki saari khwahishai'n poori ho jaae'n tho zindagi ka lutf aur maqsad he khatam ho jaae,

aap nay bohot he khoobsoorat aur mukhatasar andaaz may poori zindagi k fulsafey ko kirdaar ka jaama pehna kar paish kia hai!meri taraf say iss khoobsoorat tehreer par zabardust daad wasool keejieyethmbup:

[shahid_naman]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

very nice aquari ge app na yah story jo likhi ha waka he bahot he acha andaz sa lakih ha very nice:rose

abi kaya kha jaya app ke es story ka baray ma keyu ka yah takrebun main story ha her tarha sa aik jasi agar es ma kush shikvay wagara ya koi hass waja app batateen chornay ke yah to maray khayal ma koi khass nahi ha ab kay jis na apni life ma sab hasil kar leya ha ka ab usay dubara wo hasil ho sakti ha kaya usay dubara hasil karna chaheya.....?


story likhnay ke andaz to app ka bahot acha ha tareef karta hoon

very nice:rose

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

very beautiful written aquari jaani :rose

bohat kamm ilfaaz mein bohat ziyada keh diya :clap:

keep it up

[aquari]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

very nice aquari ge app na yah story jo likhi ha waka he bahot he acha andaz sa lakih ha very nice:rose

abi kaya kha jaya app ke es story ka baray ma keyu ka yah takrebun main story ha her tarha sa aik jasi agar es ma kush shikvay wagara ya koi hass waja app batateen chornay ke yah to maray khayal ma koi khass nahi ha ab kay jis na apni life ma sab hasil kar leya ha ka ab usay dubara wo hasil ho sakti ha kaya usay dubara hasil karna chaheya.....?


story likhnay ke andaz to app ka bahot acha ha tareef karta hoon

very nice:rose

likhney k andaz ko paasnd krney ka shukriyaa..
is chahyea wali baat k barey main bus itna kehna chahoongi k nahi ussey dobara paney ki koshish nahi krni chahyea jo yeh sub hasil krney k baad app k pass ana chaheyy bulk merey khayal sey tu ager woh phr dobara khud sey bhi ana chahyee tu ussey apni zindagi main shamil nahi krna chahyeaa
or rahi bat k sub kuch honey k bad bhi woh chalii jati hain tu ...ya tu ussey mohabat nahi thi,ya phr us ki koi majboori thi donoo baatain hosakti hain mager phr bat kafi in detail hojayee gi..:)

very beautiful written aquari jaani :rose

bohat kamm ilfaaz mein bohat ziyada keh diya :clap:

keep it up

haa kabhi kabhi kum lafz bhi bauht kuch kehdetey hian na...
thx dear

[aquari]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

kuchh paanay k liyee kuchh khhona pardta hai,laikin baaz auqaat bohot kuchh paa leney k baawajood bhi aik tashnagi rehti hai,kisi ko piar ki kisi ko daolat ki,agar zindagi ki saari khwahishai'n poori ho jaae'n tho zindagi ka lutf aur maqsad he khatam ho jaae,

aap nay bohot he khoobsoorat aur mukhatasar andaaz may poori zindagi k fulsafey ko kirdaar ka jaama pehna kar paish kia hai!meri taraf say iss khoobsoorat tehreer par zabardust daad wasool keejieyethmbup:

ha baja farmaya app ney ager zindagii main tishnagi na hoo tu be'maza hoajyee mager aisi tashnigi bhi na hoo k jis ki taskeen hi mumkin na hoo..!
thori si koshish ki thi kuch zindagi k falsfey ko bayan krney ki..pasand krney ka bauhttttt shukriyaa

[*Rida*]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
wah...buht zabardast.......sorry late reply kar rahi hoon....yeh main nay dosri martaba perha hai aaj...pehlay reply karna bhol gai thi....:phool:

buht hi zabardast likha hai :hug:

[aquari]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
wah...buht zabardast.......sorry late reply kar rahi hoon....yeh main nay dosri martaba perha hai aaj...pehlay reply karna bhol gai thi....:phool:

buht hi zabardast likha hai :hug:

W salam..
tum 10bar parhoo rida...jitni bar parhoogi mujhey utnaa hi acha lagey gaa..:hug:
tareef ka shukriyaa...:phool:

[Wafa]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

ussay bholnay ke zid mai...ussi cheez ko paa liya hai..jis ke ussay khuwahish the.........:thmbup:
bohot khoobsurat andaaz mai bayaan keya dear.......parh kar bohot acha laga....:rose

[aquari]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

ussay bholnay ke zid mai...ussi cheez ko paa liya hai..jis ke ussay khuwahish the.........:thmbup:
bohot khoobsurat andaaz mai bayaan keya dear.......parh kar bohot acha laga....:rose

haa yehi ..yani ussey bhoola kr bhi nahi bhulaya :)
pasand krney ka shukriyaa..

[baykamal]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

Assalaam o alaikum
kya haal hay aquari saahiba kaisi haiN aap.. hehe.. story aap ki paRhi hay laikin mujhayyai samajh nahi aataa hay k aap kaisay yai sabb kuch likh sakti haiN jab k aap aik laRka nahi haiN aap ko to kisi bibi k nuqta e nazar ko paish karna chahiyai ya aap beheter taur par aap wo paish kar sakti haiN.... ba haisiat aik laRki k.. shayad ussi wajah say aik bohat hi halki si kami nazar aa rahi hai... baaqi aap ki taza tareen story(istory baqaul karachi waloN k ) nazar say guzar gaee acha hua k aatay hi kuch acha paRhnay ko mil gya warna phir teen chaar maheenay nikal jaatay baghair kisi pegham k...
aur likhaiN,aur likhti rahaiN ALLAH mazeed quwwat e qalam ataa farmayai...
Raza Baykamal

[Nokia_Afridi]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

Hazar Askh bahay Ak Khushi ka ley.......

Aqua........................:salam::salam: Bohat khuub

[aik_lerki]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

ussay bholnay ke zid mai...ussi cheez ko paa liya hai..jis ke ussay khuwahish the......... :em:
bohat he zabardast likha hai

Yon jurm e MOHABBAT ki saza dete hai dunya
hansty hoay chahron ko rula dete hain dunya
armaan machalty hoay derty hain dilon main
jazbaat ka yon khoon baha dete hai dunya

[uzair143]

Re: TUjhey bhoolney ki koshish main

as salam alikum aquiry sahiba
sab se pehle to app ko itni achi tehreer per mubarakbad mashallah bout likha app ne,hum ne is ko aik afsana type banaya lakin bout jald katam ker dia ager is ko mazeed barha deti to zaida acha ho jata.khair phir bhi bout acha likha app ne.
aik baat jo bay kamal sahb ne kahi k app ki lerki hai or aik lerke per likha hai to beh kamal bahi aik acha writer wohi hota jo apne app ko choor dosri cheezo ko dekh ker us per likhe apne per to her koi likh sakta hai kisi bhi cheez ka kamal us waqt hota hai k koi nayi cheez ho
baki main abhi aik chota sa writer ho,her aik apni soch hoti hai
afana acha laga
Uzair Saleem