Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

[aquari]

:embarasse

[jia]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

Aslamoalikum:rose
very nice and attractive likha hay app nay :)....pehly to lga k yeh mainy he likha hay same mery jaisi setuation bayan ke hay app nay ...kia hr lrki k saath aisa he hota hay yaan yeh humari qismat hote hay k jisay hum logo dil ke gehraioon say chahty hain usi k bary main humain bohat mushkil imtihaan ka samna krna prta hay or humain pta bhi nahi hota k agy he pal humary saath kia honay wala hay yaan kia ho choka hay .....really bohat he acha likha hay app nay..keep it up:thmbup:
b happy:rose

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

Aslamoalikum:rose
very nice and attractive likha hay app nay :)....pehly to lga k yeh mainy he likha hay same mery jaisi setuation bayan ke hay app nay ...kia hr lrki k saath aisa he hota hay yaan yeh humari qismat hote hay k jisay hum logo dil ke gehraioon say chahty hain usi k bary main humain bohat mushkil imtihaan ka samna krna prta hay or humain pta bhi nahi hota k agy he pal humary saath kia honay wala hay yaan kia ho choka hay .....really bohat he acha likha hay app nay..keep it up:thmbup:
b happy:rose

W salam
hmm mohabat hr jaga ek jaisi hi tu hoti haii,or shayed hum larkiyoo k naseeb
likhey bhi ek hi qalm sey jatey hainn...ya shayed aaj kal k halat hi ek jaisey hogaye hai k hr mohabat krney waleyy ko aisey hi imtehanoo sey guzrna parta haii,or qismat kub kaha jaker palt jayee koi kuch nahi kehsaktaa kabhi qasoor humara hota hia,kabhi qismat ka tu kabhi waqt haii mager khasara or dard humarey hi hissa main ata haii
pasand krney or apney comments deney k lya thankyou soo much jia:phool:

[jia]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

W salam
hmm mohabat hr jaga ek jaisi hi tu hoti haii,or shayed hum larkiyoo k naseeb
likhey bhi ek hi qalm sey jatey hainn...ya shayed aaj kal k halat hi ek jaisey hogaye hai k hr mohabat krney waleyy ko aisey hi imtehanoo sey guzrna parta haii,or qismat kub kaha jaker palt jayee koi kuch nahi kehsaktaa kabhi qasoor humara hota hia,kabhi qismat ka tu kabhi waqt haii mager khasara or dard humarey hi hissa main ata haii
pasand krney or apney comments deney k lya thankyou soo much jia:phool:

app nay bilkul theek kaha hay k kabhi humara qasoor hota hay or kahen qismat bdal jati hay or jo kuch bhi hota hay woh sab humain he brdasht krna hota hay...mery khiyal say bhi ajj kal k halaat he aisy hain k kisi pr andha dhondh yaqeen nahi krna chahaiy humain khud he apny app ko snbhalna hota hay to is liay acha yehi hay k hum log aisi nobat he na any dain or pehly he snbhal jain...lakin dossri trf yeh bhi hay k aisy kamoon main snbhla hi nahi jaa skta bs phisalna asaan hota hay snbhalna bohat mushkil hota hay or snbhalny waly bhi aisy moqa pr nahi snbhalty.....khair likhti rahain or humain apni sharings main kuch na kuch seekhny ka moqa daiti rahain... b happy:rose

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

superb is the word for Aquari

aap ki tehreer mein bohat maturity aa rahi he...good effort...keep writting and sharing

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

aha
hamesha ki tarha bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai aap ney
ek baat bohat pasand aayi hai aur mein khud bhi issi ki qail hu ke
"jiss manzil ko jaana hi nahi uss raastey pe bhi kyu chala jaye"

aise hi ghair zimmedarana rawaiyo se hi insaan ka dusre insaan par se yakeen uth jaata hai
mohabbat jaise khubsoorat jazbey se bhi dil kharab ho jaata hai
mein in sab majburiyo ko nahi maanti hu
insaan ko aisa kaddam barhaney se pehle sab kuch achi tarha se soch lena chahiye , apney halaat ka bhi jaiza le lena chahiye
aisa nahi hai ke hume maloom nahi hota hai ke hum kissi bhi naye rishtey ko bana'ne ke baad usse nibha saktey hai ya nahi
ye baad mein sab lame excuses hote hai
kehney ko tou aur bhi bohat kuch hai
par itna hi kaafi hai

keep ur good work up

[Mujahid Khan]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

biklkul ji baaz auqaat insaan ko woh sub kuchh mil jaata hai jiss ki uss nay khwaahish nahi ki hoti aur baaz auqaat sub khwaahishain dil may aik armaan bun kar reh jaati hain aur isi nashaib-u-faraz ka naam zindagi hai,bohot he khoobsoorat aur jagmagati tehreer hai aquari ji aisi he tehreerain humarey saath share karti rahain aur pegham writers ko jagmagati rahainthmbup:

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

app nay bilkul theek kaha hay k kabhi humara qasoor hota hay or kahen qismat bdal jati hay or jo kuch bhi hota hay woh sab humain he brdasht krna hota hay...mery khiyal say bhi ajj kal k halaat he aisy hain k kisi pr andha dhondh yaqeen nahi krna chahaiy humain khud he apny app ko snbhalna hota hay to is liay acha yehi hay k hum log aisi nobat he na any dain or pehly he snbhal jain...lakin dossri trf yeh bhi hay k aisy kamoon main snbhla hi nahi jaa skta bs phisalna asaan hota hay snbhalna bohat mushkil hota hay or snbhalny waly bhi aisy moqa pr nahi snbhalty.....khair likhti rahain or humain apni sharings main kuch na kuch seekhny ka moqa daiti rahain... b happy:rose

yes dear yehi tu life haii..jis ki arzoo hum krtey hain woh milta nahi ..or jis ki humain talb nahi hotii woh mil jata haii....!rahi baat sanbhlney ki tu emotions cheez hiaisey hian app soochoo tu bauhtttttt gehreyyy na soochoo tu kuch bhi nahi ..kuch kuch apny ouper bhi depend krta haii mager haa yeh bat fact hai k hum bhi dil rakhtey haiin kitney bhi strick hojayain kahi na kahiin..jazbat tu mojoud hoteyy hai apney under ,i think inhey under rakhney main hi behtri haii..!
mujhey bauht khushi hogii k ager merey lafzoo sey koi kuch seekh sakeyy tuu :)

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

biklkul ji baaz auqaat insaan ko woh sub kuchh mil jaata hai jiss ki uss nay khwaahish nahi ki hoti aur baaz auqaat sub khwaahishain dil may aik armaan bun kar reh jaati hain aur isi nashaib-u-faraz ka naam zindagi hai,bohot he khoobsoorat aur jagmagati tehreer hai aquari ji aisi he tehreerain humarey saath share karti rahain aur pegham writers ko jagmagati rahainthmbup:

haaa isi ka nam zindagi haii..woh zindagi hi kya jis main sub mil jayee :embarasse
bauht shukriyaa tehreer ko pasand krney kaa

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

superb is the word for Aquari

aap ki tehreer mein bohat maturity aa rahi he...good effort...keep writting and sharing

only superb:blush:
thankyou..
maturity..experience sey aa hi jati haii or phr zindagi guzartey guzartey apney saath bauht kuch sekhaa deti haii :)

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

aha
hamesha ki tarha bohat hi khubsoorat likha hai aap ney
ek baat bohat pasand aayi hai aur mein khud bhi issi ki qail hu ke
"jiss manzil ko jaana hi nahi uss raastey pe bhi kyu chala jaye"

aise hi ghair zimmedarana rawaiyo se hi insaan ka dusre insaan par se yakeen uth jaata hai
mohabbat jaise khubsoorat jazbey se bhi dil kharab ho jaata hai
mein in sab majburiyo ko nahi maanti hu
insaan ko aisa kaddam barhaney se pehle sab kuch achi tarha se soch lena chahiye , apney halaat ka bhi jaiza le lena chahiye
aisa nahi hai ke hume maloom nahi hota hai ke hum kissi bhi naye rishtey ko bana'ne ke baad usse nibha saktey hai ya nahi
ye baad mein sab lame excuses hote hai
kehney ko tou aur bhi bohat kuch hai
par itna hi kaafi hai

keep ur good work up

ha dear yeh usool sub sey behter rehta haii k jis manzil jana nahi us rah chalna kaisa...or shayed humarey lya behter bhi yehi hotaa hia k hum man lain k woh cheez huamri nahi..!
majbooriya...! main is k barey mainn 2 mukhtalif rayee rakhti hoo mager over all jis baat pr aml krti hoo woh yehi hoti hai k krney k 100 tareeqy na krney k 100 bahaneyy ...pr shayed kabhi kabhi kahi koi waqai majboor hota haii ,humra aitebar aisa uth chuka hai k kisi ki real majboori bhi nahi nazar atii..baqi i agree k waqai humain us taraf qadm hi nahi barhanan chahyea jub k maloom hoo k hum zayda time tak saath nahi chal sakteyy ,khamoshi hi behter haii :)
Thankyou soo much k app ko pasand aai tehreer :phool:

[Wafa]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

Waah bohot he khoob.......parhtay parhtay khoo he gae the .....itni realistic style hai tumhara......sach mai kabhi kabhi kuch faislay aisa ho jatay hai, jo na chahtay hoe bhi hamme kabool karnay parhtay hai..aur apnay armanoo ko dil kay kisi konay mai dabana parhta hai...........khush raho dear...parh kar bohot maza aaya......:phool:

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

Waah bohot he khoob.......parhtay parhtay khoo he gae the .....itni realistic style hai tumhara......sach mai kabhi kabhi kuch faislay aisa ho jatay hai, jo na chahtay hoe bhi hamme kabool karnay parhtay hai..aur apnay armanoo ko dil kay kisi konay mai dabana parhta hai...........khush raho dear...parh kar bohot maza aaya......:phool:

shukriya...haa dear qismat pr bhi kabhi zoor chala haii..na maney k siwa chara bhi tu nahi hotaa....
realistic..zindagi jaisii real cheez main kuch un realistic bhi likhaa jasakta haii ,i think pehely haqeeqatain tu khatum hoo phr khuwaboo ki barii aye gii ..

[_Dard_Aashna_]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

aik baar parha
baar baar parha
soch main par gai k kia kahon mgr kuch keh na paai
bas itna he kahon gi k taqdeer apna feysla mehfooz rakhti hay or achanak he ye feysla samnay aata hay to insaan aisa he shisshdar reh jata hay .

bohat acha likhti hain aap :ff:

[aquari]

Re: Wohi manzilain,wohi fasley..Kabhi tum nahi kabhi hum nahi ..!

aik baar parha
baar baar parha
soch main par gai k kia kahon mgr kuch keh na paai
bas itna he kahon gi k taqdeer apna feysla mehfooz rakhti hay or achanak he ye feysla samnay aata hay to insaan aisa he shisshdar reh jata hay .

bohat acha likhti hain aap :ff:

bauht shukriya.:phool: ka pp ney itnaa time dya meri tehreer koo
haa dear u right hum khud kitna kuch bhikr lain magher taqdeer mainkya likha hota ahii yeh waqt aney pr hi pata lagta haii :)