Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

[aquari]

:blush:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

OH GOD

aap ki tehreerein bohat jaandaar hoti hein...aap bohat achi writter bun sakti hein, aap ke ander kafi talent moojood he Mashallah se...aap ke paas sooch he, alfaaz hein aur sooch ko lafzon mein dhalnay ka huner bhi moojod he.

Keep writting :)

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

aquari jaani :rose
ek dam superb :thmbup:
inteha ka khubsoorat likha hai aap ney
yakeen jaano ilfaz nahi hai ke tareef kar saku
issi pe guzara kar lo na :khi:

kya samjhi ? :mm:

[aquari]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

OH GOD

aap ki tehreerein bohat jaandaar hoti hein...aap bohat achi writter bun sakti hein, aap ke ander kafi talent moojood he Mashallah se...aap ke paas sooch he, alfaaz hein aur sooch ko lafzon mein dhalnay ka huner bhi moojod he.

Keep writting :)

:blush: ..itniiiiiidhair sarii tareef k liyaa shukriyaa
writting sirf meri hobby hai :eye:
tehreeroo main jaan ki waja ..jazboo k jaandar hona haii :blush:

[aquari]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

aquari jaani :rose
ek dam superb :thmbup:
inteha ka khubsoorat likha hai aap ney
yakeen jaano ilfaz nahi hai ke tareef kar saku
issi pe guzara kar lo na :khi:

kya samjhi ? :mm:

thankyou dear :hug:

yehi bauht hain....:eye:

[*Hala*]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

haa!! buht alaaa or umdha lekha hai ...hamesh ki tarah....
subha subha itni achi tahareer perni ka moqea mila.... acha lagaa..
lekhti rahi ... khush rahi ... :phool:

[*Duaa*]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

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:) :) :) :)

:thmbup: :thmbup: :thmbup:

:phool: :phool: :phool: :phool:

[aquari]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

:clap: :clap: :clap:

:) :) :) :)

:thmbup: :thmbup: :thmbup:

:phool: :phool: :phool: :phool:

thankyou..........:hug:

[aquari]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

haa!! buht alaaa or umdha lekha hai ...hamesh ki tarah....
subha subha itni achi tahareer perni ka moqea mila.... acha lagaa..
lekhti rahi ... khush rahi ... :phool:

Bauht shukriyaa
chalain humari tehreer ney app ki subha ko khushgawar krdiya or abb yehi sooch kr humara pora din sanwar gaya

[musaddaq]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

:thmbup: :phool:
jiss din se juda woh hum se hua,
phooloon ne mehakna chor diya
hai chaand ka munh utra utra
taroon ne chehakna chor diya,
jab bhi dua yeh maangi, taqdeer badal de aee Malik
awaz yeh aayi ab hum ne, Taqdeer badalna chor diya

[aquari]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

:thmbup: :phool:

jiss din se juda woh hum se hua,
phooloon ne mehakna chor diya
hai chaand ka munh utra utra
taroon ne chehakna chor diya,
jab bhi dua yeh maangi, taqdeer badal de aee Malik

awaz yeh aayi ab hum ne, Taqdeer badalna chor diya

..barey achey lafzoo main meri hi tehrrer ka central idea bayan krdiya haii

[neha_ahmad]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

:thmbup: maza aa gia phir kay:phool: ey aap kay leay.such main aap bohat acha likhti ho.alfazon ka chano itna acha hay kay lafz kahin bhi udhoray nahi lagay

[aquari]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

:thmbup: maza aa gia phir kay:phool: ey aap kay leay.such main aap bohat acha likhti ho.alfazon ka chano itna acha hay kay lafz kahin bhi udhoray nahi lagay

thankyou...

[sccorpion81]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

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Zabardast Unforgetable

Ab is ki Tareef kia kerooon
Mere Pass Alfaz nahien Hain

Bhot khoobsooorat tahreer

is k subject ko perh ker aik gana Yaad aa gya

Haza rahain jo mur k daikhien kahien say koee sada na aaieee
Bari wafa say nibhaee tu nay hamari thori see Bewafai

[*Rida*]

Re: Bauht wafa sey nibhaii hum ney thoori si bewafai tumharii !

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry dear....late ho gai......(waja tum janti hoo...kahan masroof thi..)
buht hi umda alfaaaz aur buht hi umda tehrreeer....itna khobsorat likha hai keh bus......waqt kay saath.....behter ay behtreen hoti jarahi hain tumhaari tehreerain......buht buht buht hi zabardast :phool: