Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

[Masood]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Darya ko koozey mein band karney ki koshish ki hai dear! Aur bohat had tak kamyaab bhi rahi ho. Kuchh halki halki sochon ko achhey andaaz mein biyaan kiya hai aur zindagi aik rukh key aik pehloo ko jaisey dekha hai ya paya hai waisey biyaan kar diya hai. Aik achhi kavish hai - great work :thmbup:

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Darya ko koozey mein band karney ki koshish ki hai dear! Aur bohat had tak kamyaab bhi rahi ho. Kuchh halki halki sochon ko achhey andaaz mein biyaan kiya hai aur zindagi aik rukh key aik pehloo ko jaisey dekha hai ya paya hai waisey biyaan kar diya hai. Aik achhi kavish hai - great work :thmbup:

..thank you

[*Duaa*]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Aquari dear boht Umda likha hay ap nay....:clap:

waqai zindagi ki rah mien kuchh loog aysay bhi miltay hien jo zaat ka hissa ban jaaty hien....
magar manzilien juda hoti hien ......magar kuchh log juda ho k bhi juda nhi hotay....
Zara nazar jhukaai aur deedaar kar liya :D

well tumhien yahaan daykh k youn jaano k dil ki muraad puri hui hay:blush: ....
qalam chalaya hay to issay ab chalty rehna chahiay .....warna:a stick:
Sada khush rahoo:rose

[i see u]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Meri pehli koshish......:)

[Soulmate]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Mashallah jee buhat khoob likha hai ap ne

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Aquari dear boht Umda likha hay ap nay....:clap:

waqai zindagi ki rah mien kuchh loog aysay bhi miltay hien jo zaat ka hissa ban jaaty hien....
magar manzilien juda hoti hien ......magar kuchh log juda ho k bhi juda nhi hotay....
Zara nazar jhukaai aur deedaar kar liya :D

well tumhien yahaan daykh k youn jaano k dil ki muraad puri hui hay:blush: ....
qalam chalaya hay to issay ab chalty rehna chahiay .....warna:a stick:
Sada khush rahoo:rose

Tareef k liya shukriya..:phool:
manzilain tu shayed pehley sey hi juda hoti hain pr un ki taraf jatey howey kuch logo k rastet humari rahoo sey waqti tur per mil jatey hian or hum un k sath ko apney liya hamesha ka saath samjh bethtey hain ....
barey khushnaseeb hotey hai woh loog jo jis ka deedar chahyee unhain mil jayee :blush:
meri tehreer ki soorat main app ki dil ki murad poori hoi yeh jaan ker mujhey bhi qalbi itemnan mehsoos howaa
qalm tu chal para hai koshish ki hai kuch apni muntashir soochoo ko ikatha kerney ki...hope soo k yeh koshish jari rakh sakoo..:embarasse
Aisey hi muskurati raheyaa hameshaa ..:)

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Mashallah jee buhat khoob likha hai ap ne

thank you soo much :salam:

[zmufti]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

buhat khoob
ham zindagi ko apni marzi se apni pasand ke saathi ke saath jeena chahte heN magar zindagi hamien apne bahaao meN aik tinke ki manind le jaati hai
khush rahiye aur likhti rahiye
zmufti

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

buhat khoob
ham zindagi ko apni marzi se apni pasand ke saathi ke saath jeena chahte heN magar zindagi hamien apne bahaao meN aik tinke ki manind le jaati hai
khush rahiye aur likhti rahiye
zmufti

haa per phir bhi hum ba'az nahi atey yeh jantey howey bhi qismat main johogaa wohi hogaa....
Tareef k liya shukriyaa

[Shehla]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Mashallah nice writing

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Mashallah nice writing

Thankyou dear :blush:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Good going acquiry...you got potential, you got good sense to convey your message in appropriate words...best of luck, keep on sharing :)

[aquari]

Re: Wahi tham k reh gai haii.meri raat dhaltey dhalteyy

Good going acquiry...you got potential, you got good sense to convey your message in appropriate words...best of luck, keep on sharing :)

thank you so much for using such a nice and sweet words for my writting

[i see u]

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