*Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

[Aania]

*Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

ham ne first time ... muasherti masayel pe mabni afsana likhney ki koshish ki hai .. is liye BE Positive na .. aur hamen bata deejye ke muasherti haqaiq pe
Straight Writing exp mein ham kesey rahey DIL SAY .. tello .. khush raho

[*Rida*]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
hhmmm........sunaa hai aisa........:thmbup:
nice words Aani :phool:

[Aania]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
hhmmm........sunaa hai aisa........:thmbup:
nice words Aani :phool:

first time .. flow main try kia hai .. apney regular style se hat ker .. I dono .. felt like to bring social issues general mistakes in front ... :cc:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

aap ny apni muhabat main shadi kee thee yeh aap ka bee kasoor hay.....os larky sy ziyada...........................

[Aania]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

aap ny apni muhabat main shadi kee thee yeh aap ka bee kasoor hay.....os larky sy ziyada...........................

aadaab .. ye muasherti kahani hai .. ham ne socha kuch musherey ke haqaiq ko front pe layen na ... to koshish ki straight writing ki ..
shadi aur mohabbat .. tak abhi hamara safar e zindagi pohancha nahen .. chalye khush rahye .. ab ke thread dekhen to ye bataye ga zaroor ke ham .. kis had tak kaamyaab hain STRAIGHT WRITING yani, mazmoon, afsana .. etc ... :mm:

[Z.]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

aadaab .. ye muasherti kahani hai .. ham ne socha kuch musherey ke haqaiq ko front pe layen na ... to koshish ki straight writing ki ..
shadi aur mohabbat .. tak abhi hamara safar e zindagi pohancha nahen .. chalye khush rahye .. ab ke thread dekhen to ye bataye ga zaroor ke ham .. kis had tak kaamyaab hain STRAIGHT WRITING yani, mazmoon, afsana .. etc ... :mm:

Aani bohot acha likha hai

aap issi writing ko aik do baar khud parhein to iss mey mazeed flow aa sakta hai ....is key alfaaz mey....

keep writing :thmbup:

[Aania]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

Aani bohot acha likha hai

aap issi writing ko aik do baar khud parhein to iss mey mazeed flow aa sakta hai ....is key alfaaz mey....

keep writing :thmbup:

ham jab se Ishtudent hain ... ham se Proof Read nahen hota ... naa .. u ker diya kero ..

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

aadaab .. ye muasherti kahani hai .. ham ne socha kuch musherey ke haqaiq ko front pe layen na ... to koshish ki straight writing ki ..
shadi aur mohabbat .. tak abhi hamara safar e zindagi pohancha nahen .. chalye khush rahye .. ab ke thread dekhen to ye bataye ga zaroor ke ham .. kis had tak kaamyaab hain STRAIGHT WRITING yani, mazmoon, afsana .. etc ... :mm:

likin yeh mery sawal ka jawab nia hay
writer jo bee likhta hay os chracter ko pehly apny oper havi kerta hay es liy main aap sy hee mukhatib huwa tha

[Aania]

Re: *Haqeeqat Aashna Ho Kar*

likin yeh mery sawal ka jawab nia hay
writer jo bee likhta hay os chracter ko pehly apny oper havi kerta hay es liy main aap sy hee mukhatib huwa tha

inshaAllah next straight essay typo mein aap ki baat ko mad e nazar rakhoon gi as i do for nasr n poetry ... thanks for the tip