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Main or wooh... main to main hoo lakin wo kon hy ... shayed ! os ka name Mohabat ho..
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Main or Woh ....
Wo bhee Bohat Pagel hy ! Kehti hy Hum Kabhee Mill nahi sekty ..Hum do seedhi lakeerain hain jo saath saath chelti to hain .. Lakin ..Kabhee Mill nahi pati .Bohat Smjhana perta hy os ko .. Lakin osy smajh nahi aati .. Daaik yaar ! Sun meri baat goor sy sun .. Smanad sy drya , drya sy Ndiaan, Nadi sy Cheshmy ... Koi kehaa hy koi kehan.. Lakin on k pani hony ki haqeeqet sy koi inkaar nahi ker sekta .. Kitni door hain sub aik doosry sy lakin Koi yai nahi keh sekta k Pani nahi hy.. Sub pani hy .. To ho ya main hoo .. Rehy ga to pani hi na .. -
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Accha likha hai.....
per isko ik jaga ker k likhin to ziada accha laga ga....
Nice effort!
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Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB
Wah ! bhot umda .....
start hi zalim liya hy u nay ...
Likhya ... kuo kay likhnay say bhot si batain jo hum kha nahi paty khud sey wo likhai main aksar byaan ho jaati hay
FeamanAllah
Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB
Wah ! bhot umda .....
start hi zalim liya hy u nay ...
Likhya ... kuo kay likhnay say bhot si batain jo hum kha nahi paty khud sey wo likhai main aksar byaan ho jaati hay
FeamanAllahMeri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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Bohat Khub.. But Wo kon...ya Allah sab ko apney hifz-o-amaan main rakh
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hmm boaht khoob ..likha hai ap nay:thmbup:Last edited by Eshaa Chaudhry; 16 March 2006, 23:34.sigpicComment
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