Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

[handsome]

[center]Aslam-e-ALikum

Pori story ko Inpage may likhna bohat mushkil tha is liya bus pori kahani ka Khulasa lik hraha ho i hope u wil be like it :)

[saarbaan]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

assalam o alaikum

aap ki storey aaj kay muashiray ki buhut acchi akkasi kerti hay.inpage typing ki mistakes hein lekin woh itni ziada nahi hein.MA SHA ALLAH aap accha likh letay hein.isay aur barhayee aur ziada say ziada likhyee, INSHA ALLAH mazeed say mazeed nikhar aye gaa.storey likhtay waqt dheyaan rakhyee keh aap bazat e khud kisi say mukhatib nahi ho rehay balkeh storey kay her kirdar mein khud ko dhaal ker dosray kirdar kay jawab mein likhyee.storey her lehaz say acchi hay aur agar pori hoti to aur ziada acchi hoti.meri teraf say buhut buhut mubarakbaad .umeed hay apni mazeed kahaniaan bhi share kerain gay ,aap ki tehaareer ka intezaar rehay ga.
. khush rehyee.

saarbaan

[handsome]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

assalam o alaikum

aap ki storey aaj kay muashiray ki buhut acchi akkasi kerti hay.inpage typing ki mistakes hein lekin woh itni ziada nahi hein.MA SHA ALLAH aap accha likh letay hein.isay aur barhayee aur ziada say ziada likhyee, INSHA ALLAH mazeed say mazeed nikhar aye gaa.storey likhtay waqt dheyaan rakhyee keh aap bazat e khud kisi say mukhatib nahi ho rehay balkeh storey kay her kirdar mein khud ko dhaal ker dosray kirdar kay jawab mein likhyee.storey her lehaz say acchi hay aur agar pori hoti to aur ziada acchi hoti.meri teraf say buhut buhut mubarakbaad .umeed hay apni mazeed kahaniaan bhi share kerain gay ,aap ki tehaareer ka intezaar rehay ga.
. khush rehyee.

saarbaan

Jee bohat behter yaqeen janya to ya ik asli kahani hay plz dont ask me about more detail

[khurram_shaikh]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

Assalaam o alekum,


aaahhhhhh!!!!! aapki yeh tehreer perh ker yeh to nahin keh saktey hum ke bahoot dilchasp tehreer hai kyoon issmien koee dilchaspi kaa saamaan nahin yeh ek talkh haqeeqat ho sakti hai aaj ke daur ki ke hum kitne jaahil hain , hum yeh bhool jaatey hain ke yeh Allaah ki maslehat kaa nateejaa hai ke ussnien humien larkaa / larki nahin diyaa , yeh sab hum insaanoon ki na shukri kaa nateejaa hai bass aur kuch nahin, humaari janib se dheroon daad qabool karien iss tehreer ke likhnien per khush rahien

[handsome]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

Assalaam o alekum,


aaahhhhhh!!!!! aapki yeh tehreer perh ker yeh to nahin keh saktey hum ke bahoot dilchasp tehreer hai kyoon issmien koee dilchaspi kaa saamaan nahin yeh ek talkh haqeeqat ho sakti hai aaj ke daur ki ke hum kitne jaahil hain , hum yeh bhool jaatey hain ke yeh Allaah ki maslehat kaa nateejaa hai ke ussnien humien larkaa / larki nahin diyaa , yeh sab hum insaanoon ki na shukri kaa nateejaa hai bass aur kuch nahin, humaari janib se dheroon daad qabool karien iss tehreer ke likhnien per khush rahien

:rose roserose:rose

[muskaan]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

zindagi ki aik bauhat hi talkh hakeekat hai ye jisai aap nai bayaan kiya hai na hamara mashra sudhar sakta hai aur nahi ye umeed hai ke ye sudhrai ga hamari society man made hai jahan kai rules hum apni marzi sai banatai hain aur tortai hain afsoos to is baat ka hai kai rishtai bhi hum dau par laga daitai hain aur baad mein pachtawai kai siwa kuch bhi hath nahi ata ....achi kahani likhi hia aap nai :rose

[handsome]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

zindagi ki aik bauhat hi talkh hakeekat hai ye jisai aap nai bayaan kiya hai na hamara mashra sudhar sakta hai aur nahi ye umeed hai ke ye sudhrai ga hamari society man made hai jahan kai rules hum apni marzi sai banatai hain aur tortai hain afsoos to is baat ka hai kai rishtai bhi hum dau par laga daitai hain aur baad mein pachtawai kai siwa kuch bhi hath nahi ata ....achi kahani likhi hia aap nai :rose

:rose :rose :rose

[muskaan]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

:rose :rose :rose

:rose :rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Gul (Khulasa of Gul) meri phali tehrer

hummmmm really nice one