~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

:) jeE tAU yAhAn yE kAhANi aPnAy iKHtEtAaM kO pOhnChi ...
aPni rAyE zAroOr diJiYEgA.....:salam:
DuaAOn maiN yaAd rakHiYE....
KhUSh rAHiYE....:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

Abhi poori kahani nahi parhi hai
parhnay k baad he raye de sakte hai

[Life is Alone]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

muje ap ki story intresting lag rahi hai bohattt...end thora perha mai ne..inshAllah puri perh ker bataon gi kaisi lagi..per jaan nikal dene wali lag rahi hai...jitna end mai ne perha us se lag rah hai muje..or end per jo nazam..bohat khoob hai..:)

[*Hijab*]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

Walekam-Aslam
acha likha hai!

[Pakiza]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

zindagi aik asi kitab hai jis ka har safa
aik nai dastan likhta hai
aur agley safey par kia kuch likha hai
ya likha jana hai
na hum jan saktey hain aur na soch saktey hain
magar shukar hai Uss Zate-Pak ka ke
zindagi ka har safa khushi aur taskeen deta hia
ghum hain tu kia hua
Khuda bhi tu hamarey saath hai


bahtu hi acha likha hai app ney
mujhey app ki tehreer parh kar bahtu maza aaya
sada khush rahin
aur yun hi likhti rahin aur share karin

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

Abhi poori kahani nahi parhi hai
parhnay k baad he raye de sakte hai

aAp nE aBhi tAk pOoRi kAhAni kYuN nAHi pArhi....
mUjHE aAP kI raYE kA iNTEzAr hAi
iS LiYE JalDi pArHiyE aUR aPni rAaYe sE aAgAh kiJiYE.,.. :five

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

muje ap ki story intresting lag rahi hai bohattt...end thora perha mai ne..inshAllah puri perh ker bataon gi kaisi lagi..per jaan nikal dene wali lag rahi hai...jitna end mai ne perha us se lag rah hai muje..or end per jo nazam..bohat khoob hai..:)

iNtErEsTiNG LaG rAHi hAi tAu pArH tau Leti nA...
eND pArH LiA... pOoRi sTori pArhni tHi ...wOh kOn pARhE gA...:mm:
tHAnkS...aAP kO kUch tAu aCha LaGa...eNd ki nAzm hE sAHi..:khi:

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

Walekam-Aslam
acha likha hai!

sHykRiYa bOhAT bOhAt...:)

[Aabehayat]

Re: ~..wOh AjNabI ThA LeKiN..~ bY sAnA kHaN

zindagi aik asi kitab hai jis ka har safa
aik nai dastan likhta hai
aur agley safey par kia kuch likha hai
ya likha jana hai
na hum jan saktey hain aur na soch saktey hain
magar shukar hai Uss Zate-Pak ka ke
zindagi ka har safa khushi aur taskeen deta hia
ghum hain tu kia hua
Khuda bhi tu hamarey saath hai


bahtu hi acha likha hai app ney
mujhey app ki tehreer parh kar bahtu maza aaya
sada khush rahin
aur yun hi likhti rahin aur share karin

jeE SaHi kAhA aAP nE pAkIZa...sHukAr hAi uS zAat-E-PaAk kA jO hUmAin hUm sE ZiadA aUr behtar jAnTA hai...hUm jO cHAhTaY hAiN wOh AeHaM nAHi hOTa kyUn k hO skTA hai k wOh hAmArAy hAq mAiN bEhtAr nA hO..AehAm wOh hAi jO "KhuDa" cHahTa hAi..

aAP nE iTni gEhraYi sE SocHA
pAsand kArnay kA ShuRiYa
aAp bHi kHuSh RahIyE..:)