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  • #1

    -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    Mein rait ki tarha hun ye mujhe tab ehsaas howa jab usne mujhe bohat pyaar se bohat maan se apne pas rakha tha aur mein to bas uski muthi mein qaid thi her pal bas ussi k liye jeeti thi aur jaise hi usne apni muthi kholi aur mein bikhar gae ... Mujhe yun bikhra ker aur tanha chor ker chala gaya ... ajj bhi mein bilkul waisi hi hun .... wohi bikhri si ladki ... Rait ki manid .. Hawa ka jhonka ata hai aur mujhe bikhair deta hai


    Hawa k jhoonke se muraad = apne mehboob ki yaad hai
    Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
    Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
    Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
    Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?
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  • #2
    Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

    Bahoot khoob Arbian Girl
    bahoot khoobsurat tehreer likhi hai aap ne
    Hawa ka jhonka ata hai aur mujhe bikhair deta hai
    bas aisa he hota hai piyar mein bas yaaden he hasil hayat reh jati hain
    aur woh yaaden hamein rait ki tarah bikher kar rakh deti hain

    ja chuka kab ka door woh janay wala
    ab to bas yaad ka darwaza khula rehta hai
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    • #3
      Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

      bilkul sahi kaha app ne
      pasand kerne ka bohat shukriya:)
      Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
      Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
      Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
      Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?

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      • #4
        Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

        aap kii tehreer karda satoor achchii heN
        aap meN likhne ki salahiat hai koi mukhtacir kahani ya afsana bhii likhiye
        wasalam
        zmufti

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        • #5
          Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

          well abi itni achi nahi hoi hun wrtting mein ahista ahista hi sab seekhun gi i mean i will try but ik saath sab mix ho jaye ga
          pasand kerne ka bohat thankx
          Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
          Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
          Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
          Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?

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          • #6
            Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

            mujy samaj nahi aati aisi soach larkion ko kaisy paida huti hay

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            • #7
              Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

              lolzzz..... ladko ko b ati hain agr wo sochein to
              Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
              Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
              Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
              Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?

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              • #8
                Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

                Originally posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
                lolzzz..... ladko ko b ati hain agr wo sochein to
                waiasy ajeeb lagi hain soch

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                • #9
                  Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

                  matlab meri tehreer? achi nahi lagi?
                  ya apni soch ajeeb lagi?
                  Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
                  Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
                  Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
                  Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?

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                  • #10
                    Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

                    tehreer achi hay
                    lakin soch theek nahi hay....
                    shaid main ghalt hun lakin hum jis society main rehty hain larkion ko aisi soch nahi huni chaye ager ho b to sar e am bian nahi karni chayee

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                    • #11
                      Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

                      agr soch nahi hogi to likh kaise sakein ge? iska matlab ye nahi ahi k jo meine is tehreer mein likha hia wo such hi likha hai
                      waise b shayri aur tehreerein sochun se hi likhi jati hian
                      acha agr ladka likhta to usko jaiz tha sab k saamne apne khayalaat paish kerne ka?
                      ye to koi baat na hoi k ladki apni soch sab k saamne nahi rakh sakti
                      shayaad ap ye bhool rahe hain k ladkiyan b poetess hain + writers
                      mujhe apki baat ka bura nahi laga bas apki soch buri lagi
                      Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
                      Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
                      Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
                      Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?

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                      • #12
                        Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

                        Originally posted by ArAbIaN gIrL View Post
                        agr soch nahi hogi to likh kaise sakein ge? iska matlab ye nahi ahi k jo meine is tehreer mein likha hia wo such hi likha hai
                        waise b shayri aur tehreerein sochun se hi likhi jati hian
                        acha agr ladka likhta to usko jaiz tha sab k saamne apne khayalaat paish kerne ka?
                        ye to koi baat na hoi k ladki apni soch sab k saamne nahi rakh sakti
                        shayaad ap ye bhool rahe hain k ladkiyan b poetess hain + writers
                        mujhe apki baat ka bura nahi laga bas apki soch buri lagi
                        oho aap to ghusa hee kar gai hain...

                        khair ab main yehan kuch nahi kahonga kiun k pehly b aik writer ny aisa likha tha aap ap ko aik muslim larki kehlati thee aur os k khawab main na jany kia kia aata tha ....
                        waisy mera to khiyal hay k aik muslim larki k khawab main aisa nahi huna chayee...

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                        • #13
                          Re: -=Mein Rait Ki Tarha Hun=-

                          khawaabb???
                          well mein gussa nahi hoi apki soch pe hansi ati hai agr ye cheezein sochein to koi poet aur writer na banta
                          Koi Kash Dil Pe Zara Haath Rakh De
                          Mere Dil K Tukro Ko Ik Saath Rakh De
                          Magar Ye Hain Khawabo Khayalo Ki Baatein
                          Kabhi Toot Ker Cheez Koi Jori Hai?

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