~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

yeh main ny kuch din pehly apni zindgi ko likha tha....

aur ab yehan share ker raha hun..
mujy pata hay yehan buhat sary qalam kaar ny etna khobsurat likha hay k wo lajawab hay per...
mery dill k really halat esi main hain.
hope u like it

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

bahoot khoob khalil
ek mukhtasir aur dil ko chhoo janay wali tehreer
best of luck

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

Aap k yeh lafaz really meray liyay buhat qeemti hein :) Khush rahiyay:rose

ur welcome Gul
best of luck :thmbup:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

bahoot khoob khalil
ek mukhtasir aur dil ko chhoo janay wali tehreer
best of luck

thanks bhai

[vajiha]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

yeh main ny kuch din pehly apni zindgi ko likha tha....

aur ab yehan share ker raha hun..
mujy pata hay yehan buhat sary qalam kaar ny etna khobsurat likha hay k wo lajawab hay per...
mery dill k really halat esi main hain.
hope u like it

:thmbup: v nice .
bohat khubsurat bat likhi he :rose

[ahsaas]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

yeh main ny kuch din pehly apni zindgi ko likha tha....

aur ab yehan share ker raha hun..
mujy pata hay yehan buhat sary qalam kaar ny etna khobsurat likha hay k wo lajawab hay per...
mery dill k really halat esi main hain.
hope u like it

Apni Zindagi ko lafzon mein dhalna aur lafozon ko tarashna k un mein simt jaye ..buhat ala:)

[vajiha]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

wasi , ahsaas , Gul , Jiya
bohat bohat acha likha he aap ne .
bohat khubsurat alfaz ka sahar leker .khush rahye sab acha laga aap sabk tehreer'n parrh k .:rose

[ahsaas]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

wasi , ahsaas , Gul , Jiya
bohat bohat acha likha he aap ne .
bohat khubsurat alfaz ka sahar leker .khush rahye sab acha laga aap sabk tehreer'n parrh k .:rose

Thanks a lot wareesha ..
khush rahiye:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

thanks all of you

[*Hijab*]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

yeh main ny kuch din pehly apni zindgi ko likha tha....

aur ab yehan share ker raha hun..
mujy pata hay yehan buhat sary qalam kaar ny etna khobsurat likha hay k wo lajawab hay per...
mery dill k really halat esi main hain.
hope u like it

tehreer choti ho ya bari ho, lafzon ka intikhab alla ho ya adna, dekhna bus yeh chaiye ke likhney wala insan kaisey feel ker raha hai, aur bus us ki feelings ko samjhna chaiye, bohat acha likha hai aap ne:)

[Pakiza]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

yeh main ny kuch din pehly apni zindgi ko likha tha....

aur ab yehan share ker raha hun..
mujy pata hay yehan buhat sary qalam kaar ny etna khobsurat likha hay k wo lajawab hay per...
mery dill k really halat esi main hain.
hope u like it

kabhi kabhi choti si baat bhi bahut ghera asar rakhti hai
app ki ye mukhtaser tehreer bhi khehrey maani rakhti hai

bahut umda Khalil bhai:phool:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

yeh main ny kuch din pehly apni zindgi ko likha tha....

aur ab yehan share ker raha hun..
mujy pata hay yehan buhat sary qalam kaar ny etna khobsurat likha hay k wo lajawab hay per...
mery dill k really halat esi main hain.
hope u like it

khalil bhai aap ne hisa lia bohat he acha laga
bohat khub :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

filhal tou WASI ka aur Ahsas ka para hai, dono ne bohat khubsurat likha hai, very well written. lafzon say jazbon ko bayan kerna kitna muskhil hota hai, yeh tou mein bhi kuch had tak janti hoon, kyon ke aaj tak sahi alfaz mein apney ehsasat aur jazbat beyan karney say kasir hoon:)

so, aap ko aap ki mehnat per daad deney ke ilawa hum kuch ker nahi saktey, so doston, bohat khubsurat likha hai aap ne, and I hope ke us insan tak bhi yeh alfaz pohnch jayen jin ke liye aap ne yeh lafzon ke malayen paroyi hein:rose

hamesha khush rahiyerose

Bahoot Bahoot shukriya Sadia Meri khiyal mein jazboon ko lafzoon mein he
bayan karna aasan hota hai, jazboon ko bayan karnay ka is se behtar
aur koi tareeqa nahi hai
hum ne jo likhna na tha likh diya ab us insaan tak pahonche na pahonche
hamaray liye yahi kaafi hain aap logon ne isay parha aur mehsoos bhi kiya
khush rahen:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

wasi , ahsaas , Gul , Jiya
bohat bohat acha likha he aap ne .
bohat khubsurat alfaz ka sahar leker .khush rahye sab acha laga aap sabk tehreer'n parrh k .:rose

Shukriya Wareesha :rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: ~Muqabla Barye Maah-e-February 2008~

kabhi kabhi choti si baat bhi bahut ghera asar rakhti hai
app ki ye mukhtaser tehreer bhi khehrey maani rakhti hai

bahut umda Khalil bhai:phool:

khalil bhai aap ne hisa lia bohat he acha laga
bohat khub :rose

buhat buhat thanks