2 Tanziya Khaakay

[hayaa_n]

[hayaa_n]

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Nafeesa k saleeqay aur khoobsurti ki wajha say rishta foran tay paa gaya aur Nafeesa ki honay waali saas Nafeesa ki Ammi k paas aa'ain aur doosro'n ki hazaar misalai'n dainay k baad goya hoai'n k ,,baihen waisay to gharr mai'n Allah ka diya sabb kuch mojood hay laikin duniya dikhaway k liye kuch to karna hi hota hay.aap yeh list rakh lain ta'k aap ko aa'sani rahay,,.Nafeesa ki Ammi say paihley yeh list Nafeesa ki chowti baihen Habiba nay lay li aur buland aawaaz say parhnay lagi.taweel tareen list parhnay k baad woh saas sahiba say mukkhatib hui k,,aap to baraa parchaar karti thai'n k baiti Allah ki raihmat houti hay laikin aap isi raihmat ko zaihmat kiyu'n bana rahi hai'n? laikin is martaba aik naai riwayyat janamm lay'gi.aap hamari khubsurat, khoob seerat,parhi likhi,saleeqay mand baiti lay k jaa'rahi hai'n phir koi guaranty bhi nahi hay k woh wahaa'n khush bhi raihti hay k nahi'n? faiday mai'n to aap loge hi rahein gay k baiti bhi lay gaiy,saaz.o.samaan bhi aap k gharr chala jaaey ga,aap ka noon ghunna ki shakall ka dr.baita bhi aap k hi paas rahey ga.rah gaiy hamm,,, to hamaari baiti bhi gaai, samaan bhi gaya aur har waqt ka aik dharka bhi laga rahey ga k pata nahi'n Nafeesa k saath kiya sulook ho raha hay? phir talaaq ka haqq bhi aap k hi paas mehfooz rahay ga. is liye is gharr say hamm aap ko Nafeesa day rahey hai'n aur aap is list k mutaabiq tamaam samaan hamaray gharr day kar jaaiye.yaani dulhann ham dai'n gay aur jahai'z larkay waalay dai'n gay,,.
itni dair say sab moo'n khoulay Habiba ki batai'n sunn rahey thay k saas sahiba ghussey say kaanpti tharrati khari ho ga'ain k,,haay haay mai'n nay kown'si ghair sharrai baat ki hay? arey ALLAH k RASOOL nay bhi to apni sahabzaadi ko jahaiz diya tha.mai'n bhi to usi ALLAH K RASOOL ki pairwi kar rahi hu'n,kown si ghair sharrai baat mai'n kar rahi hun?

[Masood]

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:lol :lol - Haan ji aur aisey log kaafi hain jo apney liye shariyat ko apna letey hain magar shariyee kamon ko bhool jatey hain.... Haya - i don't wanna say anything anymore to u - coz u r a good writer good poet :) Khush raho.

[Masood]

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Nafeesa k saleeqay aur khoobsurti ki wajha say rishta foran tay paa gaya aur Nafeesa ki honay waali saas Nafeesa ki Ammi k paas aa'ain aur doosro'n ki hazaar misalai'n dainay k baad goya hoai'n k ,,baihen waisay to gharr mai'n Allah ka diya sabb kuch mojood hay laikin duniya dikhaway k liye kuch to karna hi hota hay.aap yeh list rakh lain ta'k aap ko aa'sani rahay,,.Nafeesa ki Ammi say paihley yeh list Nafeesa ki chowti baihen Habiba nay lay li aur buland aawaaz say parhnay lagi.taweel tareen list parhnay k baad woh saas sahiba say mukkhatib hui k,,aap to baraa parchaar karti thai'n k baiti Allah ki raihmat houti hay laikin aap isi raihmat ko zaihmat kiyu'n bana rahi hai'n? laikin is martaba aik naai riwayyat janamm lay'gi.aap hamari khubsurat, khoob seerat,parhi likhi,saleeqay mand baiti lay k jaa'rahi hai'n phir koi guaranty bhi nahi hay k woh wahaa'n khush bhi raihti hay k nahi'n? faiday mai'n to aap loge hi rahein gay k baiti bhi lay gaiy,saaz.o.samaan bhi aap k gharr chala jaaey ga,aap ka noon ghunna ki shakall ka dr.baita bhi aap k hi paas rahey ga.rah gaiy hamm,,, to hamaari baiti bhi gaai, samaan bhi gaya aur har waqt ka aik dharka bhi laga rahey ga k pata nahi'n Nafeesa k saath kiya sulook ho raha hay? phir talaaq ka haqq bhi aap k hi paas mehfooz rahay ga. is liye is gharr say hamm aap ko Nafeesa day rahey hai'n aur aap is list k mutaabiq tamaam samaan hamaray gharr day kar jaaiye.yaani dulhann ham dai'n gay aur jahai'z larkay waalay dai'n gay,,.
itni dair say sab moo'n khoulay Habiba ki batai'n sunn rahey thay k saas sahiba ghussey say kaanpti tharrati khari ho ga'ain k,,haay haay mai'n nay kown'si ghair sharrai baat ki hay? arey ALLAH k RASOOL nay bhi to apni sahabzaadi ko jahaiz diya tha.mai'n bhi to usi ALLAH K RASOOL ki pairwi kar rahi hu'n,kown si ghair sharrai baat mai'n kar rahi hun?

MahsaAllah kya soch paee hai hamari dost ney. Aik sey barh kar aik zabardast teer barsata huwa mazmoon likhti ho haya. Tum mujhey aadat daal rahi ho keh TA JI tumharey mazameen ka intizaar karey :zuban:

[hayaa_n]

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Assalam.o.aleikum
ta ji,,, aap ka likha huwa har tareefi jumla mairay liye aik aiyzaaz ki haisiyat rakhta hay kiyu'n kay aap jaisay aala paaey kay writer jab mairay likhay huway ko sarahtay hain to khushi hona aik fitri si baat hay.aap nay jis tarha mairi hamaisha qadam qadam par howsla afzaai ki hay woh mairay liye na'qaabil-e-faramosh hay.Allah ka jitna bhi shukar ada karun woh kam hay k mujh jaisi junior ko itna saraha aap nay.Bouhat shukriya ta ji.:)

[Muhammad Khalil]

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realy buhat ala

[hayaa_n]

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Really bouhat shukriya khl ji k aap ko maira likha huwa pasand aaya.khl ji khush rahiye.:)

['SamRazi']

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Issey kehtey hain jahalat ki intiha , aisey logo ko to :a stick: :korra: :hathora :hathora


wese kamal ka likha hai Haya

['SamRazi']

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Nafeesa k saleeqay aur khoobsurti ki wajha say rishta foran tay paa gaya aur Nafeesa ki honay waali saas Nafeesa ki Ammi k paas aa'ain aur doosro'n ki hazaar misalai'n dainay k baad goya hoai'n k ,,baihen waisay to gharr mai'n Allah ka diya sabb kuch mojood hay laikin duniya dikhaway k liye kuch to karna hi hota hay.aap yeh list rakh lain ta'k aap ko aa'sani rahay,,.Nafeesa ki Ammi say paihley yeh list Nafeesa ki chowti baihen Habiba nay lay li aur buland aawaaz say parhnay lagi.taweel tareen list parhnay k baad woh saas sahiba say mukkhatib hui k,,aap to baraa parchaar karti thai'n k baiti Allah ki raihmat houti hay laikin aap isi raihmat ko zaihmat kiyu'n bana rahi hai'n? laikin is martaba aik naai riwayyat janamm lay'gi.aap hamari khubsurat, khoob seerat,parhi likhi,saleeqay mand baiti lay k jaa'rahi hai'n phir koi guaranty bhi nahi hay k woh wahaa'n khush bhi raihti hay k nahi'n? faiday mai'n to aap loge hi rahein gay k baiti bhi lay gaiy,saaz.o.samaan bhi aap k gharr chala jaaey ga,aap ka noon ghunna ki shakall ka dr.baita bhi aap k hi paas rahey ga.rah gaiy hamm,,, to hamaari baiti bhi gaai, samaan bhi gaya aur har waqt ka aik dharka bhi laga rahey ga k pata nahi'n Nafeesa k saath kiya sulook ho raha hay? phir talaaq ka haqq bhi aap k hi paas mehfooz rahay ga. is liye is gharr say hamm aap ko Nafeesa day rahey hai'n aur aap is list k mutaabiq tamaam samaan hamaray gharr day kar jaaiye.yaani dulhann ham dai'n gay aur jahai'z larkay waalay dai'n gay,,.
itni dair say sab moo'n khoulay Habiba ki batai'n sunn rahey thay k saas sahiba ghussey say kaanpti tharrati khari ho ga'ain k,,haay haay mai'n nay kown'si ghair sharrai baat ki hay? arey ALLAH k RASOOL nay bhi to apni sahabzaadi ko jahaiz diya tha.mai'n bhi to usi ALLAH K RASOOL ki pairwi kar rahi hu'n,kown si ghair sharrai baat mai'n kar rahi hun?

Buhut zabardast likha hai Haya :lol ................. Is main nafeesa ki behan ka kirdar to buhut hi jana pehchana sa laga mujhe, iss se kuch apni batein yaad aa gayi :D

[hayaa_n]

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Assalam.o.aleikum
Saima Shaheen ji aap ko maira likha huwa pasand aaya.bouhat shukriya aur yeh read kar kay to bouhat hi khushi hui kay Habiba ka kirdaar aap say milta julta hay .kahi'n aap dono'twins to nahi'n hai'n?:)
Bouhat shukriya howsla afzaai ka.Khush rahiye.

['SamRazi']

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Assalam.o.aleikum
Saima Shaheen ji aap ko maira likha huwa pasand aaya.bouhat shukriya aur yeh read kar kay to bouhat hi khushi hui kay Habiba ka kirdaar aap say milta julta hay .kahi'n aap dono'twins to nahi'n hai'n?:)
Bouhat shukriya howsla afzaai ka.Khush rahiye.

Nahi meri koi twin nahi na ho sakti hai, werna mere mama papa ka kya ho ga, wo mujhe hi bhugat lain buhut hai oun ke :p .......... laikin habiba ke kirdar main aur mujh main yeh baat mushtarik hai ke aisey moqo'n per is tarah ki batein sunien to Do-tak jawab detay hain, aur hum jesi lerkian moun-phat bhi mashour hoti hain :lol



Khush raho, aur acha likhti raho :phool:

[hayaa_n]

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hehehehehehe agar ghalat bato'n kay khilaaf bolnay par''MOO'N PHATT''Ka khitaab bhi sunna paray to koi baat nahi'n.hehehehe Habiba ko ''MOO'N PHATT''Khala ji qisim ki aurtain kaihteen to woh un ko''SAB KUCH GHATA GHATT'' kaih daiti hehehehe kay aisay loge ghata ghatt sab kuch kha pee kar hazam bhi kar laitay hai'n.hehehehehehe
thanks for your nice reply.:)

[shummu]

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wah wah kya khaakhey hain....bahut khoob...haya jee aap kya likhti hain..ghazab..bahut zyaada aapko alfaaz pe girift hai...aapki soch bhi bahut umda hai....writers zone mein ab tak maine sirf aap ki hi tehreerin paRhi hain......aur saari ki saari tehreerin lagti hai jaise kisi bahut professional senior writer ne likhi ho...........u r an incredible writer! meri jaanib se dheron daad pesh hai ................:)

Shumaila

[hayaa_n]

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wah wah kya khaakhey hain....bahut khoob...haya jee aap kya likhti hain..ghazab..bahut zyaada aapko alfaaz pe girift hai...aapki soch bhi bahut umda hai....writers zone mein ab tak maine sirf aap ki hi tehreerin paRhi hain......aur saari ki saari tehreerin lagti hai jaise kisi bahut professional senior writer ne likhi ho...........u r an incredible writer! meri jaanib se dheron daad pesh hai ................:)

Shumaila

:jazak: :) Shumaila ji aap ka reply teesri martaba parh rahi hu'n..kis qadar khoobsurat lafzon main aap nay howsla afzaai ki hay..apna likha huwa bhi again read kiya k waqai kiya main nay aisa likha hay k itnay umda lafzon say saraha gay? :cc: mujhay to aap ka reply apni tehreer say ziyada achcha laga..Allah ka shukar ada kiya k maira likha huwa aap ko pasand aata hay.warna main kiya aur mairi bisaat kiya..Shumaila ji bouhat bouhat shukriya...aap k replies mairay liye khaas ehmiyat rakhtay hain..:)

[Salauddien Mengal]

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great..............