Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

[J.KHAN]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

voted to wasi mujhe un ki tehreer achhi lagi
baqi sab ki bhi achhi thin

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

Vote to Wasi anjum

[naveed iqbal]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

ajeeb bat hay main jab vote denay lega hon to lekha hoa aaya hay keh aap pehlay hi vote day chukay hain jabkeh main to pehli bar vote cast ker reha hon

[Life is Alone]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

Votedd

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

ajeeb bat hay main jab vote denay lega hon to lekha hoa aaya hay keh aap pehlay hi vote day chukay hain jabkeh main to pehli bar vote cast ker reha hon

naveed iqbal ji hosakta hai k aap say double click hogaya ho
kabhi kabhi net problem bhi hoti hai, aapka vote to add hochuka hai
main ne dekh lia hai :rose agar by mistake esa hogaya hai to
aap yahan baata dain, hum isi vote ko count kar lain gay

[*Hijab*]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

Hum sehra naseeb waley bhi kise chand kay tamanaye hua kartey hein:) itni khubsurat line, bohat he umda..bohat he sehr-angaiz aur dil ko chu leney wali tehreer likhi hai aap ne withlove!
aap ka andaz-e-beyan bohat khubsurat hai, aap jis andaz say cheezon ko descirbe kartey hein..manazir...kardar..sab kuch!
use of simile..metaphor..sab kuch bohat lajwab hai:)
ALLAH aap ko khush rakhey:)

[*khushi*]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008


chand aur judai ka dard
vot3d 4 wasi bro...
ap shayari ki tarah likht3 bi bht umda hain....khush rahy3 and k33p writing:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

thanx khushi:)
And sab ka shukriya jinhoon ne mujhe vote diye:rose
thanx all of u

[lucky]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

voted 4 WASI

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

thanxxxx lucky

[AbgeenA]

Re: Raye Shumari Baraye Muqabila jan: 2008

voted