Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

[Pehli``Barish]

Asalam-o-alikum
umeed karti hon aap sab theek hongay
to janab hum apny aik our afsany k sath hazir hain

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

:rose

[Rai]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

kia baat ha aap ny to kamal ker di mujhy alfaaz nahi mil rahy haan k ma kia kahoon.bohat hi acha ha perh ker dil kush ho gaya r afsorda bhi.aap ny bohat acha likha ha .kush rahiy :rose

[GumShuda]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

Nice Afsana

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

kia baat ha aap ny to kamal ker di mujhy alfaaz nahi mil rahy haan k ma kia kahoon.bohat hi acha ha perh ker dil kush ho gaya r afsorda bhi.aap ny bohat acha likha ha .kush rahiy :rose

bohat shukriya Rai :rose
khush raho

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

Nice Afsana

thanks ji :rose

[Pakiza]

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bahut khubsoorat
kis qadar hassin akasi ki hai app ne PAkistan ke haalat ki
aur ikhtetaam aur bhi khubsoorat kar dia
waqai ansoo bahut kuch kar jatey hain
aur hum ko lagta hai ke ye sirf humari ankh se behtey hain

umda tehrer....maza aaya parh kar...:)

[Pehli``Barish]

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bohat shukriya pakiza :ff:
sada khush raho

[arshii4u]

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nice.........................

[Yaaram]

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Bohat acha afsana hay - already parh chuka hon - bohat acha likha hay aap ne

[Pehli``Barish]

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nice.........................

bohat shukriya :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

Bohat acha afsana hay - already parh chuka hon - bohat acha likha hay aap ne

bohat shukriya :rose

[Hashim Raza]

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pehli barish
dr. sameera sahiba
bohot khoob afsana
hamesha ki tarha piyaari aur achhi tehreer
likhti raho aur share karti raho
khush rho sada

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Bint-e-aain (Aafsana)

bohat shukriya hashim

[Roshan-ali]

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bohat acha afsana lakha hai

I like it i have no word about it niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee