~Masehaii~

[Yaaram]

Re: ~Masehaii~

mashALLAh bohat achay :) dil ko mu'h lene wali tehreer hay :) nice written

[withlove]

Re: ~Masehaii~

aansoo maseeha sabit hue..

janab-e-pehli``barish, aaj pehli baar aap ki nasri takhleeq parhnay ka itefaq hua.. jaan ker khushi huee ke kafi pukhta qalam ki hamil hein.. afsana pehli satoor se afsanchay ka sa gumaa'n deta tha.. magar aap ne alfaaz ke khoobsoorat istemal se issay khoob phelaya.. aakhir tak qari ko apni girift mein rakha.. mundarja bala ikhtatami alfaaz.. bohat pur'asar rahay.. insaan ki be'basi se insaan ke sabr-o-qarar tak ki sabhi kefiyat ko beyan kernay mein kamyaab rahi.. bunayadi tor per eik umdah takhleeq... Bohat si daad-o-tehseen hamari janib se bhi qabool kijiye.. Bohat Nawazish :rose

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

meri hosla-afzai ka bohat shukriya,
khush rahain :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

mashALLAh bohat achay :) dil ko mu'h lene wali tehreer hay :) nice written

bohat shukriya :ff: