~Masehaii~

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

galay tu laga lai wo lekin apko larki banana paray ga manzoor hai ??? warna galay tu door ki baat choona bhi nahi kia pata uth jao :d

galy lagny ki baat yahan per kahen bhi nahi hai aap zara phir ghor say parh lain :a stick:

[GumShuda]

Re: ~Masehaii~

galy lagny ki baat yahan per kahen bhi nahi hai aap zara phir ghor say parh lain :a stick:

ohhoo lipat kay roona bi tu galay lagnay kay jaisa hi sahi na :d. muhawratan kaha tha.
chalo mein correction karta hoon kah..........koi Liptay ga nahi :blush:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

hmmm theek

[GumShuda]

Re: ~Masehaii~

hmmm theek

itna sooch kay theek kaha lagta nahi theek hai.

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

nahi ji esa kuch nahi

[GumShuda]

Re: ~Masehaii~

nahi ji esa kuch nahi

acha chalo phir ap hanas kay dikhao, say cheeeeeeeese :D

[great_pisces]

Re: ~Masehaii~

very nice sameera

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~Masehaii~

bahooy khoobsurat aur dukh bhara Afsana hai
Aur bahoot he khoobsurati se likha gaya hai

[Life is Alone]

Re: ~Masehaii~

bohat dukh se or takleef se bhara afsana hai sumaira...
bohat acha likhti ho ap...keep writing..:)

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

very nice sameera

bahooy khoobsurat aur dukh bhara Afsana hai
Aur bahoot he khoobsurati se likha gaya hai

bohat dukh se or takleef se bhara afsana hai sumaira...
bohat acha likhti ho ap...keep writing..:)

aap sab ka bohat shukriya
sada khush rahain :ff:

[ε�з � ΰ T T Є ŗ f Ł � ε�з]

Re: ~Masehaii~

bohat khobsorat tehreer hay....

dukh bhi huwa perh ker :(

[Pakiza]

Re: ~Masehaii~

Salamz

bahut khubsorat tehrer hai parh kar waqai dil par asar hua.......bahut khub likha hai
Mashallah

keep writing

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

bohat khobsorat tehreer hay....

dukh bhi huwa perh ker :(

hmm dukh na karo ye aik farzi kahani thi haqiqat nahi :ff:

Salamz

bahut khubsorat tehrer hai parh kar waqai dil par asar hua.......bahut khub likha hai
Mashallah

keep writing

bohat shukriya sis :ff:

[raafi]

Re: ~Masehaii~

bahut acha likha hai..... jab mein iss kahani ko parh raha tha aisa lag raha tha jese mera kirdaar vo jo doctor uss khatoon ko bachana chahti hai vo mein tha .... . jab kahani khatam hoi tu mujhe aisa laga jese yeh mera apna gham tha...... aap kay likhnay kay style ka jawab nahi........

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~Masehaii~

bohat shukriya raafi aap ne jis andaz main saraaha hai mujhy
bohat he khushi hoi . khush rahain :ff: