*!!*!!*YeHi ZInDagI HaY*!!*!!*

[jia]

:rose

[Yaaram]

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Sahe Kaha aap ne Jia..Zindagi aik challenge type hay....is ko ji lena har soorat main hi jee lena kehlata hay
Bohat achi tehreer likhi hay :) Simply Awesome :)

[refreshing_breeze]

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once again very nice written jia jaani :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahoot achha likha jia aap ne
apni feelings ko bahoot udma wording mein bayan kiya
her insaan ko saharay ki zaroorat parti kisi sathi ki zaroorat hoti hai jis se dil ki her baat
keh saken....aap ne bhi un feelings ko bayan kiya hai
likhti rahen aur hamaray sath share karti rahen
khush rahen

[aquari]

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haa dear....zinadagi tu hr hal main guzrani haii.:)

[*khushi*]

Re: *!!*!!*YeHi ZInDagI HaY*!!*!!*

dekho ab mei aese nahi kehti k tum mujhse milti ho kafi
tumhari aur meri soch b bht milti hai
bht acha likha hai
simply awesome:rose
kuch b ho zindagi nahi rukti chalti rehti hai shayed issi ka naaam zindagi hai !!:)

[jia]

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Thanx 2 all of u:)
hosla afzai ky liay bohat bohat shukriya
b happy:rose

[ChaMpioN PaKiStaNi]

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zbetr10.keep it up................:)

[Pakiza]

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amazing
Gul app ke alfaz main mujh ko apni feelings nazar aatin hain
waqai ye ehsase muhroomi kabhi kabhi bahut rulata hai
par jena issi ka naam hai ke sab kuch jan kar..apni jaga pehchan kar
muskura kar zindagi guzar do

umda sharing
keep it up

[Mind hackeR]

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hmm...!!!
bohut acha likha hai aap ne...!!!
be-hissi k iss muashrey mai basney waley logon k ravaiyon ki akasi achey andaaz mai ki hai...!!!
esey hi likhti raho aur share kerti raho...!!!
khush raho... :)

[hasnain]

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nice story jia

[uzair143]

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jia sahiba
bout acha likha app ne kabhi kabhi insan ko kud sochna chaye
nice sharing
keep it up
Uzair

[Hashim Raza]

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bohot khoob
achhay jazbat aur ehsasast ka izhar kia hai

[*Hijab*]

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bay-shak ji...aap jis vision say apney aap ko duniya ki nazron mein paish karein gey, woh aap ko aisa he samjhein gey, koi bhi aap ke dil mein tou jhank ker dekhta he nahi hai:)
bohat acha likha hai aap ne, keep writing:)

[Roshan-ali]

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niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
jia