~*Aik Kahaani*~

[jia]

Aslamoalikum:rose

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: ~*Aik Kahaani*~

arey wah jia jaani kya khub likha hai aap ney :clap:

parhtey waqt aap ki tehrir mein aise hi kho gayi jaisa ke aquari ki tehrir ko parhtey waqt kho jaya karti hu :blush:

bohat hi pyaara likha hai aap ney :thmbup:

starting lines ek dum hi kissi aur duniya mein ley jaati hai par uss ke baad phir wohi haqeqi duniya ki talkhi aankho ke aagey aa gayi

kuch tou jaadu hai aap ki tehrir mein :rose

[ahsaas]

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Dear jia ..ye jo soch ap ny lafzon mein dhali hai kia umdagi sy apna haq ada ker diya hai aur in lafzoon mein kitni sachai hai ..aur sab se barri baat ye k is mein tanhai hoty hoye bhi mayoosi nahin hai ..buhat khoob

khush rahiyee..:)

[jia]

Re: ~*Aik Kahaani*~

arey wah jia jaani kya khub likha hai aap ney :clap:

parhtey waqt aap ki tehrir mein aise hi kho gayi jaisa ke aquari ki tehrir ko parhtey waqt kho jaya karti hu :blush:

bohat hi pyaara likha hai aap ney :thmbup:

starting lines ek dum hi kissi aur duniya mein ley jaati hai par uss ke baad phir wohi haqeqi duniya ki talkhi aankho ke aagey aa gayi

kuch tou jaadu hai aap ki tehrir mein :rose

thanx alot RB dear
main to bohat confuse thi k 1st try hay pata nahi kia ho ga ...laikin shukr hay Allah ka k achi koshish ho gai:)
Thanx alot once again...laikin abhi main aquari ki trhaan nahi likh sakti:comfort:

[jia]

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Dear jia ..ye jo soch ap ny lafzon mein dhali hai kia umdagi sy apna haq ada ker diya hai aur in lafzoon mein kitni sachai hai ..aur sab se barri baat ye k is mein tanhai hoty hoye bhi mayoosi nahin hai ..buhat khoob

khush rahiyee..:)

Thanx alot ahsaas dear:rose
abhi to yeh start hay dear ......abhi to mujhy
or bhi acha likhna hay.....:eye:
thanx :rose
b happy:rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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very nice jia bahoot achha likha hai
likhti rahi aap is se bhi achha likh sakti hai
aap ki doosri tehreer ka intazzar rahe ga

[_Dard_Aashna_]

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its really so nice jia

[jia]

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Thanx alot WASI and Dil_e_Veran:rose
hosla afzai ka bohat bohat shukriya
b happy:rose

[aquari]

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:clap:...bauht khoob jia
1st time k lehaz sey tu bauht hi achi tehreer hia..
ek simple sa sawal jo k shayed aaj kal hr dil rakhney waley k samney ajata hai k kuu?..ku bina kahye loog zindagiyoo sye chaley jatey hian
is barey main jitni bhi baat karoo kum haii..
app ney bauht kum lafzoo main bauht pyarey andaz main jazbat ki akassi ki hia..or jaisa k sub ney kaha in the last us main hope hia...im ummid k chiraghh ko kabhi bujhney na denaa
or haa..u said k app aquari jaisa nahi likh sakti...nahi dear ap aquari sey zayda achaa likh sakti hoo..kunk aquari ki tehreeroo main isrf muntashir soochain hian:)
keep it up:em:

[jia]

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:clap:...bauht khoob jia
1st time k lehaz sey tu bauht hi achi tehreer hia..
ek simple sa sawal jo k shayed aaj kal hr dil rakhney waley k samney ajata hai k kuu?..ku bina kahye loog zindagiyoo sye chaley jatey hian
is barey main jitni bhi baat karoo kum haii..
app ney bauht kum lafzoo main bauht pyarey andaz main jazbat ki akassi ki hia..or jaisa k sub ney kaha in the last us main hope hia...im ummid k chiraghh ko kabhi bujhney na denaa
or haa..u said k app aquari jaisa nahi likh sakti...nahi dear ap aquari sey zayda achaa likh sakti hoo..kunk aquari ki tehreeroo main isrf muntashir soochain hian:)
keep it up:em:

:)Thanx alot aquari dear:rose
main aquari jaisa likh nahi sakti aisa isliay kaha hay kion k abhi to start he ahy abhi mujhy thore or mehnat krni ho ge or us k baad he tumhary jaisa likh sakoon ge :):lpop:
wel thanx once again

[Soulmate]

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hmmm nice writing

[*Rida*]

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wah ...buht khooob....acha likha hai :em:

[Life is Alone]

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bohat zaberdastt likhaa hai...jia...really bohat khubsurat likha hai....likhtii rhayee..:)

[*Hijab*]

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Walekam-Aslam, bohat acha likha hai aap ne Jia dear, bohat he khubsurti say manazir ko describe kiya hai aap ne, very well written, keep sharing:)

[Pakiza]

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bahut khub
zindagi ko jeeney ka ye fun agar har kisi main aajaey tu ye dunya sab hi ko haseen lagen lagey gi
very thought full Jia....acha likhti hain app....keep writing