Zindagi thak gayee....

[Aabgeena]

bas aisay hi kuch likha...shaid sawaloon k jawab mil jayain...



aaj bohat thakan hay...kahin andar...man ki thakan...zehni thakan...zindagi thak si gayee ho jaisay...bojhal hain aankhain...bas abhi barseen k kabhi...janay ye
ehsaas ye thakan kiun itni haawi ho jati hay kabhi...kiun lagta hay k ab bas...bohat hogaya..kiun dil uchaat sa ho jata hay hur kaam say...kahin man nahi lagta...kahin dil nahi behelta...kuch nahi bhata dil ko...aisay main kisi saharay kia zaroorat shiddat say mehsoos hoti hay aisay dost ki jo zara kandha thapthapaey ....galay say lagaey...thori himat berhaey per jab aisa koi nahi hota tau aik hi raasta reh jata hay ...aankhain..aansoo...bas aik hi raasta...tanhayee main baith k aansoo bahana aur phir bojhal dil thakan zada zehan ko liay zindagi k safar pe rawana ho jana...jo janay kab tamaam hoga...!

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Zindagi thak gayee....

bas aisay hi kuch likha...shaid sawaloon k jawab mil jayain...



aaj bohat thakan hay...kahin andar...man ki thakan...zehni thakan...zindagi thak si gayee ho jaisay...bojhal hain aankhain...bas abhi barseen k kabhi...janay ye
ehsaas ye thakan kiun itni haawi ho jati hay kabhi...kiun lagta hay k ab bas...bohat hogaya..kiun dil uchaat sa ho jata hay hur kaam say...kahin man nahi lagta...kahin dil nahi behelta...kuch nahi bhata dil ko...aisay main kisi saharay kia zaroorat shiddat say mehsoos hoti hay aisay dost ki jo zara kandha thapthapaey ....galay say lagaey...thori himat berhaey per jab aisa koi nahi hota tau aik hi raasta reh jata hay ...aankhain..aansoo...bas aik hi raasta...tanhayee main baith k aansoo bahana aur phir bojhal dil thakan zada zehan ko liay zindagi k safar pe rawana ho jana...jo janay kab tamaam hoga...!

Asslam-o-Alikum Wr Wb

Very nice , bhot acha likha

FeamanAllah

[Aabgeena]

Re: Zindagi thak gayee....

walikum assalam...

is main acha kia hay janab...:)

perhnay ka shukriya...:rose

[Yaaram]

Re: Zindagi thak gayee....

Aabgenay achi tehreer likhi hay aur sab ka sab to acha hay ......zindgee ke tezi bayan ki hay aapne.....

[Z.]

Re: Zindagi thak gayee....

zindagi mey thakan zaroor hoti hai ...jab aeysa ho to thori deyr kuk jana chahiye ...aapney liye...aapney aap ko jaanch leyna chahiye....apney maqsad ko ..apney safar ko...

is tarhan kerney sey aagey ka safar kuch sahal ho jata hai

khush rahien aur likhti rahein :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Zindagi thak gayee....

bas aisay hi kuch likha...shaid sawaloon k jawab mil jayain...



aaj bohat thakan hay...kahin andar...man ki thakan...zehni thakan...zindagi thak si gayee ho jaisay...bojhal hain aankhain...bas abhi barseen k kabhi...janay ye
ehsaas ye thakan kiun itni haawi ho jati hay kabhi...kiun lagta hay k ab bas...bohat hogaya..kiun dil uchaat sa ho jata hay hur kaam say...kahin man nahi lagta...kahin dil nahi behelta...kuch nahi bhata dil ko...aisay main kisi saharay kia zaroorat shiddat say mehsoos hoti hay aisay dost ki jo zara kandha thapthapaey ....galay say lagaey...thori himat berhaey per jab aisa koi nahi hota tau aik hi raasta reh jata hay ...aankhain..aansoo...bas aik hi raasta...tanhayee main baith k aansoo bahana aur phir bojhal dil thakan zada zehan ko liay zindagi k safar pe rawana ho jana...jo janay kab tamaam hoga...!

Buhut khoob likha hai :thmbup:


Mazeed ka intezar rahey ga :phool: