Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

[Z.]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

inpage sey dosti ki koshish jarii rakhoo
mager roman sey bhi bigarna nahi :D

baat to sahih ki aquari :d ... to mujhey in dono key sath thora diplomat rahna perhey ga ..... :khi:

Main likh nahin paoun ga :( abhi ghar per Internet nahin aur kaam per waqt nahin milta... chalein phir bhi koshish karta hoon

khair hai aap iss bar Roman mey post ker deiN .... koi massla hi nahi :d

sorry bohat late ho gai hon lekin abhi jaldi me bas yehi likh pai hon:blush:

Ameen :)

and bravo!! :rose

[Z.]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

as its never too late :d ... so meyri philosophical tehreer haazir hai :khi:

Dunya

[aquari]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

zaberdast xenya,,app ka yeh duniya ka falsfa mujehy bauht acha laga :em:

[AbgeenA]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

as its never too late :d ... so meyri philosophical tehreer haazir hai :khi:

Dunya

bohat khoob Xenya,bohat acha falsafa he:thmbup:

[zmufti]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

sorry bohat late ho gai hon lekin abhi jaldi me bas yehi likh pai hon:blush:

Hamzaad saheba

aap ki tehreer buhat achchi lagi
opening paraghraph buhat achcha thaa magar us ke baad aap ne buhat ikhticaar se kaam liyya aur duniya ko imthaan gaah qarar de kar tehreer khatam kar di.

agar is meN aik paraghraph kuch is tarah ka bhee ho jaata jis meN duniya ki zaahri khoobsurati aur is ki kashish ka zikr hota to tehreer ke impact meN izafaa ho jaata

is maah ke liye mausool hone waali teenoN tehreeroN ka bunayadi paighaam aik hi hai na jaane aisa kiyoN hua

khush rahiye aur likhti rahiye
zmufti

[zmufti]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

as its never too late :d ... so meyri philosophical tehreer haazir hai :khi:

Dunya

Xenya jee
dair aaye durust aaye
aap ki tehreer se kuch to raunaq hui
warna to yeh silsila mayuus kun jaa raha hai
ramzaan meN shayad creativity kam ho jaati hai
aap ki tehreer paRh kar mujhe aise laga keh daur-e-haazir ke kissi mubaligh ka dars paRh rahi huuN
hamara is maah ka mozo thaa "Duniya"
magar aap ki tehreer ka focus hai duniya meN insaan ka tarz-e-amal ya phir us ka zindagi ko baratne ka tareeqa
sorry magar mujhe aisa laga keh main topic background meN chala gaya
mera khayal hai keh agar youN likha jaata keh duniya aap ke nazdeek kyaa hai? kaisi hai? aur aap ke saath duniya ka rawayyia kaisa hai? aap duniya ko kitni ehmiat deti heN? etc to ziyada behtar thaa

likhti rahiye aur khush rahiye
zmufti

[AbgeenA]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

Hamzaad saheba

aap ki tehreer buhat achchi lagi
opening paraghraph buhat achcha thaa magar us ke baad aap ne buhat ikhticaar se kaam liyya aur duniya ko imthaan gaah qarar de kar tehreer khatam kar di.

agar is meN aik paraghraph kuch is tarah ka bhee ho jaata jis meN duniya ki zaahri khoobsurati aur is ki kashish ka zikr hota to tehreer ke impact meN izafaa ho jaata

is maah ke liye mausool hone waali teenoN tehreeroN ka bunayadi paighaam aik hi hai na jaane aisa kiyoN hua

khush rahiye aur likhti rahiye
zmufti

tehreer pasand karne ka shukria:)or ikhtesar is leay laga k me ne waqt ki kami ki waja se end me jaldi me likha:blush:
or bunyadi pegham aik sa is leay laga ho shaed ham sab ne aik hi dunya par likha na:khi:

[KurriPunjaban]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

main ny yehan sab kee tehreers dekhain aur parri b hain mujy to ab ahsas huwa hy k main kiun nahi likhti...
Dunia k bary main mery Ideas buhat hee alag kisam ky aur ajeeb hain aur jin main buhat ziyada reallity b hain lakin mujy likhna nahi aata jaisa ap logon ny urdu likhi hy
ager koi bhala ker k mujy bata dain k writing kaisy karty hian i mean story kaisy banaty hain to main kuch likh sakon
Yehan KHALIL sahib ka sharing
how to become writer dekhi hy really buhat acha laga hay
per abi tak kisi ny i mean unon ny help nahi kee
can any body do some for me..how to write a story?

[aquari]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

main ny yehan sab kee tehreers dekhain aur parri b hain mujy to ab ahsas huwa hy k main kiun nahi likhti...
Dunia k bary main mery Ideas buhat hee alag kisam ky aur ajeeb hain aur jin main buhat ziyada reallity b hain lakin mujy likhna nahi aata jaisa ap logon ny urdu likhi hy
ager koi bhala ker k mujy bata dain k writing kaisy karty hian i mean story kaisy banaty hain to main kuch likh sakon
Yehan KHALIL sahib ka sharing
how to become writer dekhi hy really buhat acha laga hay
per abi tak kisi ny i mean unon ny help nahi kee
can any body do some for me..how to write a story?

thats very nice k app likhna chahti hain
ager app urdu writting k hawaley sey jana chahati hain tu yeh ek software hia Inpage us pr app likh sakti hain..is software ka downlaod app ko Pegham softwares main mil jaye gaa app aram sey download kr lain or phr peghamn academy main is software k hawaley sey tutorials bhi mojoud hainn app un ki helo sey urdu main likh sakti hainn..filwaqt ager app ko yeh muhskil lag raha hai tu appp Roman main hi likhyeaa or yahan share karainn.ek story ko likhney k lya kin baatoo k dehan krna zaroori hai yeh mujh sey behter app zmufti saheba sey pooch lain she is senior in us woh app ko bauht achey sey samjha daingii .baqi ager app apney khyala hum sey share krna chahti haii tu filhal unhian qalmband krk yahan share karain..slowly slowly app improve bhi karaingii or ek mukamil kahani bhi likhney lag jayain gii .
phr bhi koi baat ap poochna chahain tu plz ask humain khushi hogi app k queries ko answer krk

[Z.]

Re: Mahana Nacri silsila baray September

Xenya jee
dair aaye durust aaye
aap ki tehreer se kuch to raunaq hui
warna to yeh silsila mayuus kun jaa raha hai
ramzaan meN shayad creativity kam ho jaati hai
aap ki tehreer paRh kar mujhe aise laga keh daur-e-haazir ke kissi mubaligh ka dars paRh rahi huuN
hamara is maah ka mozo thaa "Duniya"
magar aap ki tehreer ka focus hai duniya meN insaan ka tarz-e-amal ya phir us ka zindagi ko baratne ka tareeqa
sorry magar mujhe aisa laga keh main topic background meN chala gaya
mera khayal hai keh agar youN likha jaata keh duniya aap ke nazdeek kyaa hai? kaisi hai? aur aap ke saath duniya ka rawayyia kaisa hai? aap duniya ko kitni ehmiat deti heN? etc to ziyada behtar thaa

likhti rahiye aur khush rahiye
zmufti

sorry Zmufti sis thora sa late ho gaya reply kerney mey ...thanks for your time :rose

tehreer hazir hai ...
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