Mahé june ka mauzoo: Soch!

[Z.]

haan woh dil kamzoor hoty hien bcoz woh kisi ko dukh day sakty hien nah hee kisi ko dukh mien daykh sakty hien
magar
woh dil sab say zyada mazboot aur taqatwar bhi hoty hien jo doosroon ki jhooli mien mohabbat bharty hien aur jawab mien kaanty chunty hien aur apni jhooli unsay bharty jaaty hien phir bhi aah nhi dua nikalti hay unkay hontoon say

sahih ... shukrya du'a :)

[aquari]

[*Rida*]

yeh thraed main nay aaj open kia hai....Sumera ki takhleeq dekh kar khushi bhi hoi unhooN bay had khobsorti say likha aur thora sa hairat ka jhatka bhi laga...kiun keh
bilkul same theme lai kar main nay bhi apnay paas kuch likha howa hai...jis mein editing karni thi kuch....aur woh rakhi hi hai abhi.....:emb:
Sumera ab jab main woh post karon tu plzz aap yeh na kehna main nay aap ki naqal ki hai...
waisay main yahan post nahin keron gi...alag thread banaon gi........:emb:

aqauri aap ki tehreer bhi apni jaga jaan daar hai./....:phool:.

[aquari]

yeh thraed main nay aaj open kia hai....Sumera ki takhleeq dekh kar khushi bhi hoi unhooN bay had khobsorti say likha aur thora sa hairat ka jhatka bhi laga...kiun keh
bilkul same theme lai kar main nay bhi apnay paas kuch likha howa hai...jis mein editing karni thi kuch....aur woh rakhi hi hai abhi.....:emb:
Sumera ab jab main woh post karon tu plzz aap yeh na kehna main nay aap ki naqal ki hai...
waisay main yahan post nahin keron gi...alag thread banaon gi........:emb:

aqauri aap ki tehreer bhi apni jaga jaan daar hai./....:phool:.

thankyou rida...
haa wisey aksar aisa hota haii k humarey khayalat,mushahidat ek doosrey sey miltey hainn kunk over all aas pass zindagi tu sub ki ek jaisi hii hai naa...:)

[*Duaa*]

meri koshish :blush:

nice work dearoo:rose
saheh kaha sara daroomdaar hamari sooch par hay..achha ya bura...aur sooch bgayr amal wqt aur aqal k zya'n k siwa kuch nhi.....

yeh thraed main nay aaj open kia hai....Sumera ki takhleeq dekh kar khushi bhi hoi unhooN bay had khobsorti say likha aur thora sa hairat ka jhatka bhi laga...kiun keh
bilkul same theme lai kar main nay bhi apnay paas kuch likha howa hai...jis mein editing karni thi kuch....aur woh rakhi hi hai abhi.....:emb:
Sumera ab jab main woh post karon tu plzz aap yeh na kehna main nay aap ki naqal ki hai...
waisay main yahan post nahin keron gi...alag thread banaon gi........:emb:

aqauri aap ki tehreer bhi apni jaga jaan daar hai./....:phool:.

as salam o alaikum rida:rose
aray hamaray saath to yeh aksar hota hay k hum kisi thread mien jaaty hien reply karnay lagty hien to pata chalta hay k same baat rida jaani keh chuki hien aur hum say behtr andaaz mien .....:phool:
mujhy kabhi aysa nhi lagay ga k rida nay meri naqal ki...is liay no worries:na:
aur aaap usay yahan post kiun nhi karien gien:mm: ......agar sirf is wajah say to mujhay achha nhi lagay ga:embarasse

[Muhammad Khalil]

As salam o alaikum:)

hum haazir hien apni tehreer k saath:blush:

khush rahiay:)

ap plz zara Kirdar wazeh karian gee???

[Muhammad Khalil]

meri koshish :blush:

ap kee koshash humain buhat pasand ai aap ko 9/10 marks milty hian...???
:rose :rose :rose ..........hamary future main hee hamari soch ka amal dakhal hay

[*Duaa*]

ap plz zara Kirdar wazeh karian gee???

mien samjhi nhi...?bcoz meray khyaal say to har baat boht waazeh hay...kya koi baat mabham reh gai...?:mm:

[Muhammad Khalil]

[Zindgi]

[*Duaa*]

ap kee story main jo kirdar hain wo kon hian aur un main kia rishta hay?

aap yaqeenan un kirdaaroon ki baat kar rhay hien jo saamnay hien kahani mien....to un mien koi sa bhi rishta ho sakta hay.....dono behnien bhi ho sakti hien aur khala bhaanji bhi.....aur friends bhi.......kiun...chalay ga?

Buhat achi tehreerain hain dono kee..........i like them really..

aur janab Khalil sahib ap ny her masla main lazmi apni taang urani huti hay:kr:

thanx Zindgi
khush rahiay:rose

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[Muhammad Khalil]

aap yaqeenan un kirdaaroon ki baat kar rhay hien jo saamnay hien kahani mien....to un mien koi sa bhi rishta ho sakta hay.....dono behnien bhi ho sakti hien aur khala bhaanji bhi.....aur friends bhi.......kiun...chalay ga?



thanx Zindgi
khush rahiay:rose

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Nahi...........................aik write k liy aisa sochna theek nahi k koi bee ho sakta hay..............story ka pher koi climax nahi huta ager kirdar wazeh na hontoo..


aur sath main yeh zindgi ko reply kion ker dia hay:tauba

[*Duaa*]

Nahi...........................aik write k liy aisa sochna theek nahi k koi bee ho sakta hay..............story ka pher koi climax nahi huta ager kirdar wazeh na hontoo..


aur sath main yeh zindgi ko reply kion ker dia hay:tauba

meray liay kirdaar waazeh hay aur mien nay koi bhi nhi kaha bal k aap k saamnay chand rishty rakhay haan un mien say koi bhi ho sakta hay..in rishtoon mien jo mien nay aap say byaan kiay agar friendship ho to hee aysi batien ki jaa sakti hien.....
aur yeh to depend karta hay na k agar mien is story ko aagay lay kar chaloon to in k darmiyaan konsa rishta chunoon............jitni kahani likhi us mien woh friends hien...ab yeh friendship sirf friend say bhi ho sakti hay aur kisi rishtay k hawalay say bhi ho sakti hay.......... so here is no confusion... all points are clear

[Wafa]

sumera aur aquari.....bohot acha likha hai....parh kar waqae mai bohot acha laga.........kitni ache tarha aap apni feelings ko express kar leti hoo.....great....i am really impressed........:thmbup:

[miss sng]

As salam o alaikum:)

hum haazir hien apni tehreer k saath:blush:

khush rahiay:)

WA SALAM:rose

mujhay samjh nhi aarhi k main kaya kahoon..sab kuch to app ny tehreer main he likh dia hy.....:)

bohat takleef hoti hy jab aitabar ki dhajiyaan urra dyta hy koi....:embarasse
kisi say wada karoo...to pora karoo....aur ..kisi ka aitabar kabhi na torooo...:lpop:
bohat acha likha hy app ny....:phool:

khush rahiy...:lpop:

ALLAH hum sab ko asay dhookay baaz loogoon say bachaiy rekhay...AMEEN:dua :dua