~aaj jo bo'o gay kal wohi ....~

[*Duaa*]

As-salam-o-alaikum

yeh mayri pehli mukammal tehreer hay:blush: :blush: :blush: ..
warna is say pehlay apni soochoon ko tahreer ki shakal nhi day paai:embarasse

Umeed hay apko mayoosi nhi ho gi:lpop:

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
Sumera sis............. buht umda.....:em:
yaqen kijiye aap nay mairi soch ko alfaaz dai diye....
buht acha laga perh kar...........
yaqeenan aaj kal yeh tazaad taqreeban her jaga hi dekhnay ko milta hai....aaj kal tu jo loag ikhlaqiyat per amal kartay hoyw nazar aatay hain ...dosray loag ya tu unhain kamzor samajhtay hain ya baywaqouf....
keep writing dear :phool:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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aray waah kuri...tum to chaa gai ho :blush: bohat khoob likha he tum ne...mashallah...keep writting and sharing good stuff :)

[aquari]

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very nice sumera

bilkul sahi kaha app ney ..is duniya ko isi liya makafat-e-amal kaha gaya haii.....wohi baat k hum apney gereban main nahi jnaktey humain apni achaii or doosrey ki burai bus yaad rehti haii jub hum aulad hotey hian tu bus yehii soochtey hain k humsahi hain ,nafarmaniya ker k bhool jatey hian tu kabhi kisi ka dil dukha ker or jub yehi humari aulad k zariya humarey samney ata haii tu hum kehtey hian ya Allah kis gunah ki saza hia jo aisi aulad dii tu ney phir bhi apna ahtesab nahi kertey.......
bauht achi sooch hai ap ki kash k hum her bar kuch bhi kerney sey pehley yeh sooch lain k Joo Booai'in gey wohi katey gain..tu humari zindagi main asaniyaa aajayain

[zapk]

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Waqai aap ne aik nihayat aham mozu par qalam uthaya hai jo hamaray roz marra ke mushahiday main hai laikin ham is per tawajoh nahin daitay.Aisi batoon ham nazar andaz na karain to nai nasl ki parwarish ka dhara badal sakta hai,aur woh bahtareen qoum ban sakti hai.:rose

[Muhammad Khalil]

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buhat hee achy

[sccorpion81]

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Very Very Nice Bhot khoobsoorat Tahreer

[Soulmate]

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Mashallah Sumera buhat acha likha hai ap ne

[*Duaa*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
Sumera sis............. buht umda.....:em:
yaqen kijiye aap nay mairi soch ko alfaaz dai diye....
buht acha laga perh kar...........
yaqeenan aaj kal yeh tazaad taqreeban her jaga hi dekhnay ko milta hai....aaj kal tu jo loag ikhlaqiyat per amal kartay hoyw nazar aatay hain ...dosray loag ya tu unhain kamzor samajhtay hain ya baywaqouf....
keep writing dear :phool:

Wa-alaikum-salam dear :)
ap ko acha laga ...boht khushi hui.....:blush:
Dil mien ik baat thi jo keh di......agar koi ik banda bhi hamari bat ka asar lay lay to bas yeh hee hasil-e-tehreer hay.
aap ki baat bilkul theek hay.....doosroon par ungli uthhaana boht asaan aur apnya garaybaan mien jhaankna boht mushkil hota hay.
again...pasand karnay ka boht shukriya dear:rose

[*Duaa*]

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aray waah kuri...tum to chaa gai ho :blush: bohat khoob likha he tum ne...mashallah...keep writting and sharing good stuff :)

Thnx Sialkoty sahab...hosla afzaai ka boht shukriya......:salam:

[*Duaa*]

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very nice sumera

bilkul sahi kaha app ney ..is duniya ko isi liya makafat-e-amal kaha gaya haii.....wohi baat k hum apney gereban main nahi jnaktey humain apni achaii or doosrey ki burai bus yaad rehti haii jub hum aulad hotey hian tu bus yehii soochtey hain k humsahi hain ,nafarmaniya ker k bhool jatey hian tu kabhi kisi ka dil dukha ker or jub yehi humari aulad k zariya humarey samney ata haii tu hum kehtey hian ya Allah kis gunah ki saza hia jo aisi aulad dii tu ney phir bhi apna ahtesab nahi kertey.......
bauht achi sooch hai ap ki kash k hum her bar kuch bhi kerney sey pehley yeh sooch lain k Joo Booai'in gey wohi katey gain..tu humari zindagi main asaniyaa aajayain

thnx dear
sachh hay k hum nay apni zindagiyoon ko khud mushkil banaya hua hay.....
apni soochoon say,aamaal say aur apni khawahishaat say....
agar hum kuchh wqt khud ko day kar apna mohaasira kar lien to boht kuchh asaan ho jaay

[Z.]

[*Duaa*]

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buhat hee achy

Thnx Khalil:)
ap nay bilkul theek kaha aur hamari baat ko boht khobsoorat andaaz say samjha..
sachh hay yeh duniya makafaat-e-amal hay.......aur nature apna tawaazan barqaraar rakhti hy

[*Duaa*]

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Very Very Nice Bhot khoobsoorat Tahreer

Mashallah Sumera buhat acha likha hai ap ne

thnk u Sccorpion and danicool.....

hosla afzaai ka boht shukriya:salam:

[*Duaa*]

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hmm....ap k comments hamaaray liy ehm hien.......so ...yaad rakhiay ga..:D

pasand karny ka boht shukriya:blush:
khush rahiay:rose