~* Mujhey Likhna Tha *~

[WorThless]

Re: ~* Mujhey Likhna Tha *~

Hmm.......... Buhut Acha likha hai :)

Parhney ka shukriya jeetey rahyeh khush rahyeh sada abad rahyeh

[WorThless]

Re: ~* Mujhey Likhna Tha *~

forum admin sahib

dil cheen lia bhai aap nay to ..yeh to ham hein jis kay leye aap nay likhaa nahi aur una kia banay ga jis kay leye yeh mazmoon"main nay kuch likha nahi" likha gaya hay

yeh line dekhyee, aisee hi line mein nay apnay ik puranay afsanay mein kahin likhi the magar yehaan aap ka beyaan parh ker ash aqsh ker uthaa..lutf a gaya doost

aap kay mazmoon ki sab say khubsoorat line

""kuch aisa jisey perh ker ik moti tumhare ankh sey girta hua tumhare galon ko chu ker tumharey honton per ruk jata""

is khubsoorat tehreer per na cheez ki janib say daad hazir hay ..buhut accha likhtay hein

waqar masood

Likhney walon kai qabeeley sai lagtey hein :) khair parhney ka shukriya janab jeetey rahyeh khush rahyeh sada abad rahyeh aur haan main hargiz aik acha likhney wala nahi bas dil main ho jo wohi likh liya karta hoon :)

[kanwal]

Re: ~* Mujhey Likhna Tha *~

pehley bhi parha tha iss tehreer ko aaj bhi achi lagi
khush rahyie Admin ji : )

[Aabgeena]

Re: ~* Mujhey Likhna Tha *~

kia lafz itni taqat rakhtay hain...?

acha likha hay...khush rahieay...:rose

[muskaan]

Re: ~* Mujhey Likhna Tha *~

itna kuch to likh diiya hai aur bauhat hi khubsurat likha hai /yhug

khush rahiyai bauhat waisai kehtai hai kai dil ki baat keh di jai to acha hota hai yun dil mein nahi rakhni chahiyai baat bhai :)