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Buhut acha, buhut pyara likha hai :clap:
Too Good
, the last lines were so touching.
"Murad ne maa'n ki taraf dekha aur khushi se muskura diya' Goya keh raha ho k ab aap ke arma'n poorey honey ki ghari a'n pohanchi" :)sigpicComment
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Bohat khoob atinda bhi aisa hi likhti rahye SHukrya :)Allah
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Bohat hi khoobsurati sey aap ney dil ki baat ko biyaan kiya hai Muskan, muhabbat dilon ka masla hai, ismein zahir nahin aata:
Dil key bazaar mein moorat nahin dekhi jati
jab pyaar ho jaey to soorat nahin dekhi jatitumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lageyComment
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Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB
Mashalah ! bhot umda likhti hy
FeaamnAllah
Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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AOA,
Khoob kia ahsan tarike se aap nain alfaaz ko yakja kia hai kari ko kia chaye k jon jon age barre tahrer main kho jaye :masha bohat acha likha hai aap nain har aik juma khoob hai .
Sohail Abbasi.Apna haq ada karo.Comment
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its realy gr8:thmbup:
agli tahree ka intezar rahega :roseComment
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bahot he gamgeen dastan lekhi ha......Originally posted by WOH LARKI View Post
lakin acha lekha ha very nice:rosesigpicComment
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wow niceComment
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