udasi..............

[Ambreen]

merei aik kawish aap ki nazer..........

[Masood]

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Ambreen mukhtasir likha magar apney ander aik jiwan-bhar ki kahani liye huwey hain yeh alfaaz. Aap key likhey par mujhey phir sey wohi geet yaad aata hai:

jo na mil sakey wohi bewafa, yeh badi ajeeb si baat hai
jo chala geya mujhey chhor kar wohi aaj tak merey saath hai

Achha laga aap ka likhna :)

[Ambreen]

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bahut shukriya pasand kerne ka geet acha hai suna bhi hai..........mager is kahani mein koi bewafa nahin hai waqt ki gardish ka shikar koi bhi shakhs majboor tu ho sakta hai mager bewafa nahin ho sakta...

[La'hasil]

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:) khoob acha likha hai :)


likhti raha karein :)


khush rahyeah :rose

[Z.]

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:cry

[Bheegi-Palkain]

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Asslam-o-Alikum WRW B

bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[Muhammad Khalil]

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oho:(

[جنیداختر]

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bohat acha likha hai Ambreen

[sedra]

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merei aik kawish aap ki nazer..........

Hi.

Ambreen ap ki kawish kafi achee ha .Ap ki bat ko thora sa agay barhatee hoon agar ap mind na karo to
ap na hathoon ki lakeeron ka zikar kia to
hathoon ki lakeeron main aksar log nam talash krtay hian lakin ya yad rakhain agar ka jis na ya hathoon ki lakeerain banyi is main nam bhi us hi kee marze ka likhay hota ha or chah kar bhi koi un lakeerkon mian chupee taqdeer ko nahi badal saktay.

[wajid hanif]

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Hi.

Ambreen ap ki kawish kafi achee ha .Ap ki bat ko thora sa agay barhatee hoon agar ap mind na karo to
ap na hathoon ki lakeeron ka zikar kia to
hathoon ki lakeeron main aksar log nam talash krtay hian lakin ya yad rakhain agar ka jis na ya hathoon ki lakeerain banyi is main nam bhi us hi kee marze ka likhay hota ha or chah kar bhi koi un lakeerkon mian chupee taqdeer ko nahi badal saktay.

umm apni taqdeer ko to koi b badal nahi sakta wohin hota hai........jo hona hum kintne b try kar len.........

[*Hijab*]

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bohat acha likha hai.mukhtasir magar dil ko lagnay wala:)
likhti rahiye

[refreshing_breeze]

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bohat zabardast likha hai

mukhtassir lekin in depth :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahoot khoob bahoot khoobsurat andaz mein likha hai
aap ne

[uzair143]

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zaberdast