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Re: Tum Kab Aaogi Sanah?
Achi koshish hay....
Magar jazbaat kay dhaaray main aap itnay bah rahay hain kay bohat say alfaaz aapas main mayl nahin kha rahay, lafzoon main wazn daalnay kay liye unn main sachay jazbaat kay saath sachay alfaaz aur alfaaz ka aik tasalsull hona bohat zaroori hota hay jissay paRh kar qarye'en kay diloon main bhi wohi taDap paida ho jayay jo aap mehsoos kar rahay hain... apnay alfaaz main rabt paida karain aur urdu grammer per kuch aur dehaan dain.... aap ki koshish qabil-e-tareef hay, mazeed mehnat ki zaroorat hay, khush rahyeh aur likhtay rahyeh :)sigpic
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