Zindagi

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

Bohat dino baad kuchh qalamkari ki hai - umeed hai aap ko pasand aaey gi

Apney khiyalaat ka izhaar zaroori kijiye ga... :rose

Masood

[Masood]

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2. part

[Masood]

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3. part

[Masood]

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4. and final part

[ahsaas]

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4. and final part

buhat acha likha hai aap ny ...Zindgi k her pahluu ko nahayat shaistgi aur nafasat se paish kia hai ....sahee kaha k aj kal k door mein insaan ko nafsa nafsi parri hui hai ........aur usy apny ird-gird ki b khaber nahin hoti...

buhat umdah tahreer likhi hai ..

:) thnx 4 it:)

[ummid]

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Accha likha hai bhai aap ne.........:masha

[Wafa]

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:masha bohot he zabardast tehreer likhe hai....zindagi ke har pehlo ko bohot ache tareeke se beyaan kea hai...aur kaafi ache tips bhi dee hai......thanks for sharing......:rose

[*Duaa*]

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boht saada aur khoobsoorat alfaaz k istemaal say boht say ehm nukaat wazeh kiay hein ap nay......
hum nay is say boht kuchh seekha ...thnx

[Z.]

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"yaad rakhien kisi ko Hossla deyna dunya ka sab sey mushkil kaam hai"

kya waqai?

[Masood]

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"yaad rakhien kisi ko Hossla deyna dunya ka sab sey mushkil kaam hai"

kya waqai?

Zinia bacha hamarey Pakistani muashrey mein doosron ki tauseef karna bohat mushkil kaam hai. Khaas ker jab hamein char lafzon ka patah ho, kuchh hunnar aata ho to ham samajhtey hain goya ham sey behtar koi nahin. Ham apney fun ko share nahin kartey - is khof sey keh hamara fun kahin batt na jaey. Doosron ki hosla afzaii nahin kartey keh woh kahin ham sey aagey na barh jaey. Aap kitna hi achha kaam kar lein - kahin na kahin kuchh na kuchh nuqs zaroor nikala jaey ga - hamari tareef ka andaaz bhi aisa hota hai jis mein doosron ko kam'tar kiya jaey... (ofcourse yeh sab per lagoo nahin magar it's general saying)....

[Raniya Asif]

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bohat acha likha hai.a complete survey of our lives......gud work bro

[sccorpion81]

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Nice

[zmufti]

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buhat khoob
Masood saheb aap ne "Zindagi" ko jeenay ka saleeqa buhat achchii tarah bayan kiyya hai
khush rahiye
zmufti

[Z.]

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Zinia bacha hamarey Pakistani muashrey mein doosron ki tauseef karna bohat mushkil kaam hai. Khaas ker jab hamein char lafzon ka patah ho, kuchh hunnar aata ho to ham samajhtey hain goya ham sey behtar koi nahin. Ham apney fun ko share nahin kartey - is khof sey keh hamara fun kahin batt na jaey. Doosron ki hosla afzaii nahin kartey keh woh kahin ham sey aagey na barh jaey. Aap kitna hi achha kaam kar lein - kahin na kahin kuchh na kuchh nuqs zaroor nikala jaey ga - hamari tareef ka andaaz bhi aisa hota hai jis mein doosron ko kam'tar kiya jaey... (ofcourse yeh sab per lagoo nahin magar it's general saying)....

Aap ki baat bilkul theek hai, ye sirf Pakistan'ion tak mehdood nahi hia shayad kuch insaano ki fitrart hi aeysi hoti key wo apney sey aagey kisi ko nahi deykh saktey hein


meyrey khayal mey apney ko hossla deyna ziada mushkil banisbat doosron ko deyney key...nahi?

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht acha likha hai bhai....buht qeemti alfaz hain....seekhnay kay liye buht kuch hai.....achay tareeqay say samjhaya hai:rose