Main aur Shairi

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

bohat aqalmand ho gaey hen uncle aap:wk ishare se hi baat samjh gaey:khi:

main to khala samajh geya tha aap bhi to samajh jaein na - nil-bata-nil

[amber]

Re: Main aur Shairi

yehi to hamein maqsood tha keh aap ki urdu mein rasaee achhi ho aur kalmaat key mafhoom ko samajhna sehal ho :p

kuch samaj nahi ai....sehal

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

kuch samaj nahi ai....sehal

ha ha ha abhi aasan likha hai - mushkil urdu nahin likhi :zuban:

[*Hala*]

Re: Main aur Shairi

hehhehe buht mazy ka shring hai Masood ji ... :lol

[shy]

Re: Main aur Shairi

main to khala samajh geya tha aap bhi to samajh jaein na - nil-bata-nil

hen me kia samjh jaun :tomato:

[amber]

Re: Main aur Shairi

ha ha ha abhi aasan likha hai - mushkil urdu nahin likhi :zuban:

Kisi shayar ke liye asan hogi

[ummid]

Re: Main aur Shairi

:kr: :kr: :kr: :kr: :kr:
barjasta shair shaid isi ko kehte hain...:lol
Aap ne bataya nahi aap ka shair sun ker un suffi saheb ne kya kaha....:cc:

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

hehhehe buht mazy ka shring hai Masood ji ... :lol

aap ko to parh kar mazzah aaya hai - magar woh mehfil mein jo huwa woh yaad rahey ga :)

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

hen me kia samjh jaun :tomato:

keh jaisa bhateeja waisi khala :khi:

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

:kr: :kr: :kr: :kr: :kr:
barjasta shair shaid isi ko kehte hain...:lol
Aap ne bataya nahi aap ka shair sun ker un suffi saheb ne kya kaha....:cc:

haan mujhey khud hairat thi keh aisa barjasta shair kahan sey nazal ho geya tha - jab shair suna to sari mehfil kishat-e-zaafraan ban gaee aur Sufi Sahib bhi hansney lagey - aur kehney lagey: haan shair kah saktey ho :p

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Main aur Shairi

jazak ALLAH

[ummid]

Re: Main aur Shairi

haan mujhey khud hairat thi keh aisa barjasta shair kahan sey nazal ho geya tha - jab shair suna to sari mehfil kishat-e-zaafraan ban gaee aur Sufi Sahib bhi hansney lagey - aur kehney lagey: haan shair kah saktey ho :p

wah wah aap ne tu sabit ker diya ke aap ek acche shair hain...:lol

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Main aur Shairi

:kr: :kr: :kr: :kr: oooh :tauba kia huaal huaa hoga sufi sahib ka ......................aww baycharay sufi sahab ..aaenda nahin lein gey imtehaan kisi shair ka....bulkey shair ko dekh hee patli gali se nikal kharay hon gay:khi:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Main aur Shairi

Assalamo allaikum

Aaj main aap ko apni aik aap beeti sunata hoon...

DK migration karney key baad jab main pehli baar Pak geya to wahan per meri dosti chand larkon sey hui. Main us waqt teen-age mein tha. Un larkon mein aik Sufi Sahib bhi they jo kaafi parhey likhey they aur aik shair Mustafa Zaidi key doston mein sey they. Sufi Sahib khud bhi collegue key zamaney mein shairi kiya kartey they.

Unkey haath meri kitab lagi jismein meri tooti phooti shairi thi. Sufi sahib kehney lagey:

Sufi Sahib: "Masood tum kehtey ho keh tum shairi kar saktey ho, main tumhein apney collegue key zamaney ki aik ghazal ka aik misra btata hoon, mujhey uska matlab aasan urdu mein btaa do"

Masood: "Sufi sahib main ney kabhi dawa nahin kiya keh main shairi kar sakta hoon, bas aisey hi shairi sey "jagali" karta hoon :lol - aap jo imtihaan mein daalein yeh soch lijiye keh meri Urdu ki taleem siraf 3 jumatein hain"

Sufi Sahib: ".... nahin jo shairi karta hai ussey to patah hona chahiye... chalo jaldi sey is misrey ki salees urdu btao:

kushta-e-shokhi-e-rindana nigah hain ham bhi"

Qasam ley lijiye meri samajh mein aaya keh iska kya matlab tha. Main ney bohat socha phir sharmindgi sey kaha :blush: :

Masood: "Sufi sahib! main aap ko iska matlab to nahin btaa sakta, agar aap ijazat dein to aap ka shair mukamil kar doon?" - Sufi sahib ney tajasus sey kahan haan kar do....

to main ney apni sharmindgi ko alfaz mein dhanptey huwey shair yun mukamil kiya:

Kushta-e-shokhi-e-rindana nigah hain ham bhi
kisi ullu ki pathi key gham mein tabah hain ham bhi :lol :lol :lol

Mein ne aap ko pehlay hi kaha tha aur ub phir kehta hoon, aisay mushkil mushkil dooston se ijtanaab keejiye, aisay loog sehat ke liye achay nahi hotay :khi:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Main aur Shairi

haan mujhey khud hairat thi keh aisa barjasta shair kahan sey nazal ho geya tha - jab shair suna to sari mehfil kishat-e-zaafraan ban gaee aur Sufi Sahib bhi hansney lagey - aur kehney lagey: haan shair kah saktey ho :p

Yani ke aap sirf mushkil mushkil loogon mein hi nahi bethtay, bulke mushkil mushkil mehfalon mein bhi bethtay hein...oye, oye koon loog o tusi :tauba