Main aur Shairi

[Masood]

Assalamo allaikum

Aaj main aap ko apni aik aap beeti sunata hoon...

DK migration karney key baad jab main pehli baar Pak geya to wahan per meri dosti chand larkon sey hui. Main us waqt teen-age mein tha. Un larkon mein aik Sufi Sahib bhi they jo kaafi parhey likhey they aur aik shair Mustafa Zaidi key doston mein sey they. Sufi Sahib khud bhi collegue key zamaney mein shairi kiya kartey they.

Unkey haath meri kitab lagi jismein meri tooti phooti shairi thi. Sufi sahib kehney lagey:

Sufi Sahib: "Masood tum kehtey ho keh tum shairi kar saktey ho, main tumhein apney collegue key zamaney ki aik ghazal ka aik misra btata hoon, mujhey uska matlab aasan urdu mein btaa do"

Masood: "Sufi sahib main ney kabhi dawa nahin kiya keh main shairi kar sakta hoon, bas aisey hi shairi sey "jagali" karta hoon :lol - aap jo imtihaan mein daalein yeh soch lijiye keh meri Urdu ki taleem siraf 3 jumatein hain"

Sufi Sahib: ".... nahin jo shairi karta hai ussey to patah hona chahiye... chalo jaldi sey is misrey ki salees urdu btao:

kushta-e-shokhi-e-rindana nigah hain ham bhi"

Qasam ley lijiye meri samajh mein aaya keh iska kya matlab tha. Main ney bohat socha phir sharmindgi sey kaha :blush: :

Masood: "Sufi sahib! main aap ko iska matlab to nahin btaa sakta, agar aap ijazat dein to aap ka shair mukamil kar doon?" - Sufi sahib ney tajasus sey kahan haan kar do....

to main ney apni sharmindgi ko alfaz mein dhanptey huwey shair yun mukamil kiya:

Kushta-e-shokhi-e-rindana nigah hain ham bhi
kisi ullu ki pathi key gham mein tabah hain ham bhi :lol :lol :lol

[*Rida*]

Re: Main aur Shairi

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

aaaaaaaaaa... tauba hai

:kr:

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

aaaaaaaaaa... tauba hai

:kr:

Rida behna yeh itney salon sey merey zehan mein raha hai magar kabhi share karna ka khiyal tak nahin aaya. Kal un Sufi Sahib ki tasweer nazar aai to yeh waqeya zehan mein aa geya...

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Re: Main aur Shairi

Kushta-e-shokhi-e-rindana nigah hain ham bhi
kisi ullu ki pathi key gham mein tabah hain ham bhi



:lol un soofi sahab ko bhi is ka matlab pata tha ya nahi ?:khi:
woh apna yeh misra ab kisi ko nahi suanye ga, aap nay yeh haal jo kar dia us kay shair ka

[amber]

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Aap khud hi itni mushkil shairi kartay ho ...phir to aap ko is shair ka matlab to paata hona chahi tha

Aap ne yeh nahi bataya ..ke Sufi sahib ne is ka matlab bataya ke nahi

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

Kushta-e-shokhi-e-rindana nigah hain ham bhi
kisi ullu ki pathi key gham mein tabah hain ham bhi



:lol un soofi sahab ko bhi is ka matlab pata tha ya nahi ?:khi:
woh apna yeh misra ab kisi ko nahi suanye ga, aap nay yeh haal jo kar dia us kay shair ka

Sach kehti hain aap - mujhey to sharmindgi thi keh matlab na btaa saka tha, magar jo phir unkey saath huwa uska andaza kiya jaa sakta hai

[Masood]

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Aap khud hi itni mushkil shairi kartay ho ...phir to aap ko is shair ka matlab to paata hona chahi tha

Aap ne yeh nahi bataya ..ke Sufi sahib ne is ka matlab bataya ke nahi

Nahin unho ney matlab nahin btaya balkey unhein Chaey aur Mithaee key paisey zaroor dena parey they keh yehi hamari shart thi :D

Baad mein main ney khud ghaur kiya to pata chala keh iska matlab to bohat clear hai:

Kushta = farsi lafz hai iska matlab hai "qatal kiya huwa"
Shokhi = chanchalpa - shokhi (yeh to sab jantey hain)
rindana = yeh bhi farsi hai, rindana ka matlab hai MAKKAR

yani "makkar aankhon ki shokhi ka qatal kiya huwa" :wk

[shy]

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yani aap shiru se hi ese hen uncle:khi:

[Masood]

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yani aap shiru se hi ese hen uncle:khi:

aisey kaisey? :cc: - saaf saaf kah do na khala keh main NIL-BATTA-NIL hoon - apni khala per geya hoon na

[*Rida*]

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Rida behna yeh itney salon sey merey zehan mein raha hai magar kabhi share karna ka khiyal tak nahin aaya. Kal un Sufi Sahib ki tasweer nazar aai to yeh waqeya zehan mein aa geya...

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

achi lagi hai aap ki sharing..:)

[amber]

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Nahin unho ney matlab nahin btaya balkey unhein Chaey aur Mithaee key paisey zaroor dena parey they keh yehi hamari shart thi :D

Baad mein main ney khud ghaur kiya to pata chala keh iska matlab to bohat clear hai:

Kushta = farsi lafz hai iska matlab hai "qatal kiya huwa"
Shokhi = chanchalpa - shokhi (yeh to sab jantey hain)
rindana = yeh bhi farsi hai, rindana ka matlab hai MAKKAR

yani "makkar aankhon ki shokhi ka qatal kiya huwa" :wk

Ek to itni mushkil udu ko samajna mushkil hai...upar se yeh farsi ki baat kar rahay hain

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

Ek to itni mushkil udu ko samajna mushkil hai...upar se yeh farsi ki baat kar rahay hain

amber mujhey aik baat aaj btaa hi dein - aap key shairana zoq ko main koi 3 saal sey janta hoon - mujhey aap yeh btaein keh woh itni khoobsurat aur mushkil shairi aap kaisey samajh leti hain? :cc: - kya aap ki behan to paas nahin bethi hotin jo kehti hain yeh ghazal share karo :mm:

[amber]

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amber mujhey aik baat aaj btaa hi dein - aap key shairana zoq ko main koi 3 saal sey janta hoon - mujhey aap yeh btaein keh woh itni khoobsurat aur mushkil shairi aap kaisey samajh leti hain? :cc: - kya aap ki behan to paas nahin bethi hotin jo kehti hain yeh ghazal share karo :mm:

Maine aj tak koi mushkil shairi post nahi ki....aur main Wohi share karti
hun..jab mujhe samaj aye ...main apni pasand ki hi shairi hi share karti hun
Aur waese main in 3 saal me hi bohat se mushkil lafz sikhay hain:D ...isi liye
urdu kuch behtar hogai hai

[shy]

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aisey kaisey? :cc: - saaf saaf kah do na khala keh main NIL-BATTA-NIL hoon - apni khala per geya hoon na

bohat aqalmand ho gaey hen uncle aap:wk ishare se hi baat samjh gaey:khi:

[Masood]

Re: Main aur Shairi

Maine aj tak koi mushkil shairi post nahi ki....aur main Wohi share karti
hun..jab mujhe samaj aye ...main apni pasand ki hi shairi hi share karti hun
Aur waese main in 3 saal me hi bohat se mushkil lafz sikhay hain:D ...isi liye
urdu kuch behtar hogai hai

yehi to hamein maqsood tha keh aap ki urdu mein rasaee achhi ho aur kalmaat key mafhoom ko samajhna sehal ho :p