Me Ko Shiri SIkhow

[Ambreen]

Re: Me Ko Shiri SIkhow

Asslam-o-Alikum WR WB

Well bhot shukriya aap ka ky aap nay jawab diya ... aap ko aik baat bata ta chalu .. main aap ka Fan bhi hu ... aap ki koi tahreer nahi ai hay ... bhot in tazar hay mujhy ...

Khair aap nay jo baat khi hay wo bilkul sahi hay ... ya sab ka hona bhot zaroori haya ur khas kar urdu ka hona ... alfazo ka majmua hona .. khair main nay kosish to bhot ki hay per kamyab nahi ho pata hu .... hasaas to hu sab hy per shayd ander ki awaz bahir nahi aani chati hay ... well INSHALAH i hope kay main kuch na kuch asa zaroor likhu ga jo sab ko bantha pasnd ay ga ...

Per sikha to dijya na :tauba

FeaamnAllah

bahut shukriya meri tehrer pasand kerne ka..inshaAllah koshish keron gi dubara se likhne ki..

mujhey tu khud shairi nahin aati mein kistarha aap ko sikha sakti hoon:)

[�aяfaяσ�h]

Re: Me Ko Shiri SIkhow

Khair ya to mazak tha ...well baat ya hy asal main kay mujhy shiri ka shok hay per mujhy shiri aati nahi hay .... isi liya main likhta hu but main shiri main bhi kuch karna aur likhna chata hu .... jab shiri karny ka sochta hu to Qafiya mil jaata hay per Radief Date per ho ta hay aur jab Radief date sey wapis ata hay to qafiya apni wife kay pass ho ta hay ... simple ya kay Maqta aur Multa tak apny romance main khoy ho tay hay ... aur is waja say meri shairi ka sir pair apni jagha per nahi ho pata hay ...

Walekum AsSalaam

Ik bat kahu? :cc: ...u na hi likho to behtur hai :lol :lol kdn...:khi:

weshe me ka apna yehi haal hai :D ... u esha keru, k hmm nehi ush tarha to u ka yeh haal b ho sukta hai --->:tomato:

:khi: chalo best of luck

[ummid]

Re: Me Ko Shiri SIkhow

shairy karna kaun sa mushkil kaam hai...
ab dekhiye na masood bhai, yaaram jaise log jab ghazal likh sakte hain tu aap to :masha kafi zaheen hain....
fikr mat kijye jaise hi humara education pura ho jaye ga hum khud shairy karna sikh kar aap ko bhi sika denge...
tub tak thoda sabr kijye... :tasali: