**Dedicate Ashar....! ; )

[ummid]

Asalamaalaikum

Me kuch Ashaar parh rahi thi abhi tu me ko kuch dosto ka dhyaan aa gaya jin per woh ashar perfectly fir hote hain :lol....

so me ne PG per bhi aisa hi ek thread start kar rahi ho GS Mein jis mein aap bande ka naam likhe or un ki personality, habit etc ke accordin Ashar likhein....

@ SAZ... nazam nahi likhni :$... do line ka ek shair bus :P

@ Aamir... aap truck etc ke peeche likhe ashar copy karna avoid karein :$

so lets start :wink..

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Tumhein to pata he ke mera fav. shayar "Truck" he to mein kese apne fav. poet ki poetry quote na karon :(

[ummid]

Re: **Dedicate Ashar....! ; )

Tumhein to pata he ke mera fav. shayar "Truck" he to mein kese apne fav. poet ki poetry quote na karon :(

: |

[ummid]

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Aamir you ke liye shair :P

hum se dilchasp kabhi sacche nahi hote
acche lagte hain magar acche nahi hote....!

:lol

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Dedicated to Masood

Us nay kaha kon ho Tum?
Main nay kaha Hasrat Tumari

Us nay kaha Taktey ho kya?
Main nay kaha Surat Tumhari

Us ne kaha kartey ho kya?
Main nay kaha Pooja Tumhari

Us nay kaha Kaafir ho kya?
Main nay kaha aisa hi sahi

Us nay kaha chatey ho kya?
Main nay kaha Mohabbat Tumhari

Us nay kaha Pachtaoge,
Main nay kaha KismatHamari

Us nay Kaha Married hoon mai.
Main nay kaha Sorry BAJI

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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Aamir you ke liye shair :P

hum se dilchasp kabhi sacche nahi hote
acche lagte hain magar acche nahi hote....!

:lol

Begham Nawazash Ali

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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For Ummid

Aahat si koi aye to lagta hai ki tum ho.
Hawa koi lehrayi to lagta hai ki tum ho.
Ab tum hi batao, kya tum kisi BHOOT se kam ho ?

[ummid]

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Begham Nawazash Ali

For Ummid

Aahat si koi aye to lagta hai ki tum ho.
Hawa koi lehrayi to lagta hai ki tum ho.
Ab tum hi batao, kya tum kisi BHOOT se kam ho ?

jo shair you ko dedicate kiya hai me ki hansi us per khatam nahi ho rahi :rew:

waise is shair mein kuch maza nahi aaya :P

[ummid]

Re: **Dedicate Ashar....! ; )

dedicate to Aabi bhai


اچھی گزر رہی ہے دلِ خود کفیل سے
لنگر سے روٹی کھاتا ہوں ، پانی سبیل سے

دنیا مرے پڑوس میں آباد ہے مگر
میری دعا سلام نہیں اس ذلیل سے

:$

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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jo shair you ko dedicate kiya hai me ki hansi us per khatam nahi ho rahi :rew:

waise is shair mein kuch maza nahi aaya :P

:rew: tum fazool mein bool rahi ho jub ke mein tumhari baat perh he nahi raha :rew:

[ummid]

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:rew: tum fazool mein bool rahi ho jub ke mein tumhari baat perh he nahi raha :rew:

who cares :P....

chalo bhaago yahan se me ka thread kharab na karo :a stick:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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who cares :P....

chalo bhaago yahan se me ka thread kharab na karo :a stick:

[ambreen_shaam]

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masood ko dedicate karti hoon:

mujhe awaz do
mere khawob ke saharon
phirse awaz do
kaha ho tum pukaron

[ummid]

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masood ko dedicate karti hoon:

mujhe awaz do
mere khawob ke saharon
phirse awaz do
kaha ho tum pukaron

is mein aisa kya hai jo masood bhai ki personality ko match karta hai??

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: **Dedicate Ashar....! ; )

masood ko dedicate karti hoon:

mujhe awaz do
mere khawob ke saharon
phirse awaz do
kaha ho tum pukaron

Pukaro hota he Pukaron nahi. Masood se ghalat pukaar lagwa rahi ho.