Poets N Poetry

[saraah]

asslamaolikum respected members /shade
kal ek member se baat ho rahi thi ,kehnay lagay k ''saghar sadiqui ne tou shyeri mere liye hi ki hai....matlab unki shyeri mere ehsaasat aur jazbaat ki tajumani krti hai''

kabhi aapko esa feel hua ,kis poet ka kalaam aap ko lagta hai k ''aap'' ki tarjumani krta hai.....?

aur
wese aapko ko konsay poets pasand hain .....aur kiyon?

aur kabhi koi aap k liye sher kaha jata ho ya kaha gaya ho???
matlab aapki nature k hawalay se ya aap k kisi amal k hawalay se wgera wgera

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looking 4 ur detailed replies :)

[WASI ANJUM]

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asslamaolikum respected members /shade
kal ek member se baat ho rahi thi ,kehnay lagay k ''saghar sadiqui ne tou shyeri mere liye hi ki hai....matlab unki shyeri mere ehsaasat aur jazbaat ki tajumani krti hai''

kabhi aapko esa feel hua ,kis poet ka kalaam aap ko lagta hai k ''aap'' ki tarjumani krta hai.....?

aur
wese aapko ko konsay poets pasand hain .....aur kiyon?

aur kabhi koi aap k liye sher kaha jata ho ya kaha gaya ho???
matlab aapki nature k hawalay se ya aap k kisi amal k hawalay se wgera wgera

Walekum Asslam
Nice thread sara :phool:

Mujhe Wasi Shah, Farhat Abbas shah Aur Sahir Ludhiyanvi ko perh ker aisa feel hota hai jaisay ye mein kehna chahta tha mager unhon ne usay bayan ker diya ho, mujhe ye teenoo poet bahot pasand hain in ki poetry mein dard hai ghehrai hai ehsasat hain sab acha likhtay hain mager mujhe ye poet bahot pasand hain
Hmm mujh per shair kahe gaye hain shayed mujh per he thay kaha to aisa he tha :)

[*Hala*]

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w/salam
again nice thread dearo
hmmm... as Wasi ji said.... issa to mujhy be kabi kabi feel hoti hai..agar koi poetry phero... to isa lagta hai..meri lye hai.. yah mein be yahi kehna chahti ho....etc... :)

[Z.]

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walaikum salam
Mujhey halli phulki shairi pasand hai jo mujhey samaj aa jaye :-D , ziada mujhey nazmein pasand hein. Abhi tak kisi shair ney merey liye poetry nahi kahi lol ... baki kuch nazmein,ashaar aeyseys hotey hein k jin ko perhney sey aeysa lagta hai k yahi mey kehna chah rahi thi, feel ker rahi hun, ya etc etc :-D

[Tanha Hassan]

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saraah Insaani jazbat aur ehsaasat waqat k sath tabdeel hotey hain to usey aesa lagney lagta hai k shayed yeh poetry marey laey he likhi gaey hai....

Hota kuch asey hai k jab insaan prechan hota hai to wo sad poetry parhney key koshish kerta hai to asey soorat mein us mostlt ashaar apney opper fit hotey hoey mehsoos hotey hain

MMuje habib jalib..Ahmad Faraz..Fiaz Ahmad Faiz.....
shakeeb jalili...Munir Niazi.....Ahmad nadeem Qasmi pasnad hain

[Mr. Sialkoty]

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asslamaolikum respected members /shade
kal ek member se baat ho rahi thi ,kehnay lagay k ''saghar sadiqui ne tou shyeri mere liye hi ki hai....matlab unki shyeri mere ehsaasat aur jazbaat ki tajumani krti hai''

us banday ka naam batao :think:

kabhi aapko esa feel hua ,kis poet ka kalaam aap ko lagta hai k ''aap'' ki tarjumani krta hai.....?

aur
wese aapko ko konsay poets pasand hain .....aur kiyon?

aur kabhi koi aap k liye sher kaha jata ho ya kaha gaya ho???
matlab aapki nature k hawalay se ya aap k kisi amal k hawalay se wgera wgera

(edited)

looking 4 ur detailed replies :)

Mera favourite poet "Truck he", jitnay interesting shair trucks ke peechay likhay miltay hein wo kisi aik ki shairi mein itni verstality nahi milti :shyy:

Koi aik particular poet nahi pasand, mukhtalif aukaat mein mukhtalif ashaar pasand aa jatay hein, aur shair aisay pasand aatay hein jo life ki kisi hakeekat se perda uthatay hein.

Mera yeh maanana he ke ishkiya aur derd wali shairi insaan ko practical honay se door ker deti he, is liye mein ne kabi deeply is mein involve honay ki kooshish nahi ki. Her aik ka apna point of view he :think:

[MeemSheenAlif]

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asslamaolikum respected members /shade
kal ek member se baat ho rahi thi ,kehnay lagay k ''saghar sadiqui ne tou shyeri mere liye hi ki hai....matlab unki shyeri mere ehsaasat aur jazbaat ki tajumani krti hai''

kabhi aapko esa feel hua ,kis poet ka kalaam aap ko lagta hai k ''aap'' ki tarjumani krta hai.....?

aur
wese aapko ko konsay poets pasand hain .....aur kiyon?

aur kabhi koi aap k liye sher kaha jata ho ya kaha gaya ho???
matlab aapki nature k hawalay se ya aap k kisi amal k hawalay se wgera wgera

(edited)

looking 4 ur detailed replies :)

Walaikum Assalam...!!!

Mujhay lugta he Ather shah Khan Jaidi ne meri lie hi shairi ki he:shyy:

Waise jokes apart....abhi kuch salon pehle mujhay WASI SHAH ki poetry achi lagne lagi thi:lol...per Allah ka shuker he me us phase se bahir agaya....

Mein ne jub se Zaid Hamid ko suna he mujhay to Allam iqbal ki poetry bare mazae li lagne lagi he me ko romaaaaaaantic shairi nahi pasand...iqbal ki poetry mazae ki he, motivational, inspirational....jaise
"Deen kia, deen ki imamat kia
yeh kia jane yeh 2 rak'at k imam"

aur me pe kon shair kahae ga...
me pe to koi geedur nahi keehta

[Yaaram]

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walikumsalam

Nice thread saraah

Mujhey buss woh shayeri ya kalam acha lagta hay jo parhtey hi dil main utar jaye.


Mujhey Saadullah Shah ki shayeri pasand hay. :)

aur mera khayal hay ke humain yeh nai sochna chahye ke shayer humarey jazbaat ki tarjumani kartey hain. buss sachayi per mabni shayeri parhni chahye. aur mujhey bhi wahi pasand hay. mubaliga arayi achi nai lagti :)

[thefire1]

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Walaikum Assalaam Respect Saraah :)


Khulta Kisi Pay Kiyon Meray Dil Ka Maamla...!
Shairon Kay Intikhaab Nay Ruswa Kia Mujhay

Sahi kaha aap nay kay aksar jab hum koi sha'air paRhtay hain tou aisa mehsoos hota hay jaisay shayer nay yeh humaray hi halaat ko apnay lafzoon main bayan kar diya hay.... shayer ki yeh khoobi kay woh chand lafzoon main poori dastaan bayan kar daita hay qabil-e-tehseen hay... hum jaisay seedhay saadhay log tou bas lambi lambi posts say he apnay dil ki baat ya apnay ehsaasat bayan kar saktay hain!


Tum Tou Shayer Ho Qateel Aur Woh Ek Aam Sa Shakhs
Uss Nay Chaha Bhi Tujhay Aur Jataayaa Bhi Nahin......!

Shayeri ek aisi zabaan hay jo chand lafzoon main insaan kay pooray wajood ko jhanjhoR kar rakh day, uss kay ehsaasat ko jaga day, aur ussay zindagi ko srif apni zaat tak mehdood rakhnay say dour rehnay ki talqeen karay, jaisay kay ALLAMA IQBAL nay Hindustan kay musalmanoon kay zameer ko zinda karnay kay iss ka istimaal kia.... unki shaaeri paRh waqayi yeh ehsaas hota hay kay humari zindagi per srif humara hi nahin balkay unn sab insanoon ka bhi haq hay jis ka ALLAH nay aur Uss kay Rasool SAW nay hukum farmaya, yaani huqooq ALLAH ki adaaegi jis ki maafi bhi nahin aur jis ka sawal bhi hoga!
Aaj kal kay halaat jin ki waja say main khudh bohat parishaan hoon unko inn chand lafzoon main bayan kar raha hoon, umeed hay dil ko cho jayain gain!


Jaltay Ghar Ko Dekhnay Waloon, Ghaas Ka Chappar Aap Ka Hay
Aag Kay Peechay Taiz Hawa Hay, Aagay Muqaddar Aap Ka Hay
Uss Kay Qatal Pay Main Bhi Chupp Tha, Mera Number Ab Aaaya
Meray Qatal Per Aap Bhi Chupp Hain, Agla Number Aap Ka Hay
Meray Sarr Ka Khaas Nishaana Aur Wohi Khaas Andaaz
Phaikhnay Waala Koi Bhi Tha, Laikin Pathar Aaap Ka Hay

Shaeri aik aisi taaqat hay jisay sahi andaaz main istimaal kia jayay tou qoum ko jaga sakti hay.

ALLAH SWT humaray mulk ko apni hifz-e-amaan rakhay aur inn janoo kay ziya ko rokay AMEEN.

Apni duwayoon main iss khaksaar ko aur ahl-e-ayaal aur ird gird rehnay waalay tamam Pakistaniyon ki salamti kay khusoosi dua kijyey ga.

FI Amaan ALLAH

[AbgeenA]

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asslamaolikum respected members /shade
kal ek member se baat ho rahi thi ,kehnay lagay k ''saghar sadiqui ne tou shyeri mere liye hi ki hai....matlab unki shyeri mere ehsaasat aur jazbaat ki tajumani krti hai''

kabhi aapko esa feel hua ,kis poet ka kalaam aap ko lagta hai k ''aap'' ki tarjumani krta hai.....?

aur
wese aapko ko konsay poets pasand hain .....aur kiyon?

aur kabhi koi aap k liye sher kaha jata ho ya kaha gaya ho???
matlab aapki nature k hawalay se ya aap k kisi amal k hawalay se wgera wgera

(edited)

looking 4 ur detailed replies :)

Walekum Salam
mukhtalf poets ki shairi pasand he....jo achi lag jaey....nazmen or ghazlen don.......zeada is leay nahi parhti k shairi insan ko haqeeqat se farar sikhati he....

[saraah]

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Walekum Asslam

Nice thread sara :phool:

Mujhe Wasi Shah, Farhat Abbas shah Aur Sahir Ludhiyanvi ko perh ker aisa feel hota hai jaisay ye mein kehna chahta tha mager unhon ne usay bayan ker diya ho, mujhe ye teenoo poet bahot pasand hain in ki poetry mein dard hai ghehrai hai ehsasat hain sab acha likhtay hain mager mujhe ye poet bahot pasand hain

Hmm mujh per shair kahe gaye hain shayed mujh per he thay kaha to aisa he tha :)

shukria wasi :)

wasi ....wasi shah ki shayeri me kya gehrai hai...zra unn k kalam se koi ''gehra kalam'' tou share kijiye ga agr zehmat na hou tou


aur khud pe kahay gaye sher tou share kren hamaray sath /hmmm

[saraah]

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w/salam
again nice thread dearo
hmmm... as Wasi ji said.... issa to mujhy be kabi kabi feel hoti hai..agar koi poetry phero... to isa lagta hai..meri lye hai.. yah mein be yahi kehna chahti ho....etc... :)

hala jani

yeh aap ne socha hoga jatay jatay me b reply kr doon

chalain thank u

[WASI ANJUM]

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shukria wasi :)

wasi ....wasi shah ki shayeri me kya gehrai hai...zra unn k kalam se koi ''gehra kalam'' tou share kijiye ga agr zehmat na hou tou


aur khud pe kahay gaye sher tou share kren hamaray sath /hmmm

Dekhen saraah pasand apni apni hoti hai
bas mere dil ko wasi shah ki poetry he bhati hai

ye shair dekhen
Apne ehsaas se chhu ker mujhe sandal kerdo
mein kai sadiyon se adhura hon mukamil ker do


ye


Ab k bichhre hain to ehsaas hua hai hum ko
dard kiya hai judai kisay kehte hain ?

ya

tum meri aankh k tewer na bhula paoge
an kahi baat ko samjho ge to yaad aaonga

ya

samander mein utarta hon to aankhen bheeg jati hain
teri aankhon ko perhta hon to aankhen bheeg jati hain



meri aankhon se khawab dekho to ik shab na so sako ge
k khawab kiya hain azab hain ye



Dayar e gair mein kese tujh ko sada dete
Tu mil bhi jata to aakhir tujh ko ganwa dete


Filhal zehan mein yahi shair aa rahe hain....
aasaan se lafzon mein dard ko seedhe andaz mein bayan kiya gaya hai wasi ki poetry mein isi liye mujhe pasand hai

[thefire1]

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cha gayay Wasi Anjum sahab bohat khoob. yeh shair jo aap ka intikhaab hay bohat khoob laga


Tum meri aankh kay taywar na bhula pao gay
An kahi baat ko samjho gay to yaad aayon ga

[saraah]

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walaikum salam
Mujhey halli phulki shairi pasand hai jo mujhey samaj aa jaye :-D , ziada mujhey nazmein pasand hein. Abhi tak kisi shair ney merey liye poetry nahi kahi lol ... baki kuch nazmein,ashaar aeyseys hotey hein k jin ko perhney sey aeysa lagta hai k yahi mey kehna chah rahi thi, feel ker rahi hun, ya etc etc :-D

hmmmmm

muje b nazmain pasnd zayda :hairdrayer: