�!� Bhai Masood K Liye �!�

[Sky angel]

to kaya u ho?:D:

umm hazir jawab gud

[aabi2cool]

umm hazir jawab gud

wo to main hon

[MuQadas]

waisay yeh likha kia hai 4 lafz woh bhi ultay pultay aik udhar bhag raha hai to dosra udhar zabardasti aik jagha pakar k lafaz betha diya hain:D:
koi lay sur tal ismain nazar nahi aai mujhay :na:

[aabi2cool]

waisay yeh likha kia hai 4 lafz woh bhi ultay pultay aik udhar bhag raha hai to dosra udhar zabardasti aik jagha pakar k lafaz betha diya hain:D:
koi lay sur tal ismain nazar nahi aai mujhay :na:

issi ko to shairee kehtay hain 372-haha

[MuQadas]

issi ko to shairee kehtay hain 372-haha

isko shairi nahi kehtay shairi ka janaza kehtay hain

[aabi2cool]

isko shairi nahi kehtay shairi ka janaza kehtay hain

hain jee

[MuQadas]

[aabi2cool]

han ji

na jee:na:

[MuQadas]

yeh topic kahan konay khudray main para tha abhi nikal k lia

[aabi2cool]

yeh topic kahan konay khudray main para tha abhi nikal k lia

yani aap mujhy dewan e muqaddas likhnay per majboor karna chahti hain :D:

[MuQadas]

:D:
yani aap mujhy dewan e muqaddas likhnay per majboor karna chahti hain :D:

dewan na sahi 2 ,4 alfaz hi sahi

dekho bhi mohtaram abhi irshad farmanay walay hain irshad irshad

[saraah]

[MuQadas]

bhai masood ka tou kuch pata nae..........kiyon nikala ye thraed.....372-shed

zara ismain tanqeed chal rahi thi na

[aabi2cool]

dewan na sahi 2 ,4 alfaz hi sahi

dekho bhi mohtaram abhi irshad farmanay walay hain irshad irshad

lo aap bhi kaya yadd karo geee aap per abhi abhi aik shair keh dala

ُتُندی نہ دکھاؤ باد صر صر کی طرح
ہوجاؤ مقدس بن کہ تم باد صبا

ab is ka matlab saraah se pouch kar mujhy bhi bata zarooor
:phool::phool::phool:

[saraah]

lo aap bhi kaya yadd karo geee aap per abhi abhi aik shair keh dala

ُتُندی نہ دکھاؤ باد صر صر کی طرح
ہوجاؤ مقدس بن کہ تم باد صبا

ab is ka matlab saraah se pouch kar mujhy bhi bata zarooor

:phool::phool::phool:

muqqadas tumko samjh aaye tou muje b bta dena........ye ulta pulta sher......372-haha