Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

[SherAli]

salaam dosto,

ek gaanaa thaa...

umraao jaan kii ek Ghazal kaa ek she'r thaa:

na jiskii shakl hai koii, na jiskaa naam hai koii
phir aisii shai kaa kiuN hameN azal se intizaar hai

usii she'r ko Baarish N Gulaab ke liye ek parody meN badal diyaa hai, mulaaHizah kijiiye!

na jiske baal haiN koii, na jiske daaNt haiN koi
phir aisi "GAL" kaa hameN kiuN tab se intizaar hai

[*bEbO*]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

mazay ki baat hai muje ikk lafaz ki bhi samaj nahen aaee aur app ki sari mahnat pe pani pher gea so sad.

[SherAli]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

mazay ki baat hai muje ikk lafaz ki bhi samaj nahen aaee aur app ki sari mahnat pe pani pher gea so sad.

Khudaa kaa shukr hai k u kii samajh emN naii aayii is taraH meraa sar phooTne se bach gayaa...u ko Hindi emdium se paRhnaa thaa hahaha

[muneeb143]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

jee batt tu dil ko lagti hay sher ali aur barish aur gulab ki

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

Tum dono behan bhaiyoon ke maslay ke ander mein nahi bool sakta :bhago:

[Sky angel]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

ye galat bat hai
aap larkion par he q apni bakwas shairi use krty hain372-shed

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

ye galat bat hai
aap larkion par he q apni bakwas shairi use krty hain372-shed

Aap inhein kankar se maariye, mein aap ke saath hoon :khi:

[Sky angel]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

Aap inhein kankar se maariye, mein aap ke saath hoon :khi:

nai lag jay ga:khi:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

nai lag jay ga:khi:

chalein jo kankar nai lagtay wo maar leejiye teddy

[Sky angel]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

chalein jo kankar nai lagtay wo maar leejiye teddy

ye kon sy kankar hoty hain:donno:

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Barish aur Gulab par ek bongaa she'r...hahaha

ye kon sy kankar hoty hain:donno:

Yeh wo hotay hein jo nahi lagtay :khi: