is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

[u_r]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

Idea to bohat zabardast hai aur likhoon to shayid bohat achhi tehreer bhi ban jaey - jis ka aaghaz muhabbat sey ho, phir us muhabbat ki chashni ho, us muhabbat ki shiddat ho, aur phir us muhabbat mein tarrap ho jo Khuda-e-Haqeeqi key qareeb ley jaey aur phir Khuda-e-Buzurg dil sey nikli hui dua ko sunein aur qabool bhi farmaein - sach much bohat aala kahani ban sakti hai...

idea zaberdast he to phir dher kiss baat ki???????????????????????

abhi se likhna shuru kar dein...kal mein aawuhn to pehla episode parrhne ko mille!!!!!!!!(ya kehin aaisa na ho jaai ke aap dobara ghaib ho jain!!!)

[Masood]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

idea zaberdast he to phir dher kiss baat ki???????????????????????

abhi se likhna shuru kar dein...kal mein aawuhn to pehla episode parrhne ko mille!!!!!!!!(ya kehin aaisa na ho jaai ke aap dobara ghaib ho jain!!!)

hahaha

zindagi ka kya bharosa ji - kya khabar kab kahan saans ka rishta toot jaey to aap ko kya khabar ho gi keh ham bhi they :)

[crystal_thinking]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

dil kar ra so jaon nend aa re

[u_r]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

hahaha

zindagi ka kya bharosa ji - kya khabar kab kahan saans ka rishta toot jaey to aap ko kya khabar ho gi keh ham bhi they :)

agger saans ka rishta toot gya to kissi na kissi trha khabar ho hi jai gi-thread lag jai ga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

magger jabh aap aise hi ghiab ho jaate hein na to waqai confusion hi confusion hoti he-ke kiyuhn ghib hehn aur kiya huwa.

aisa karehn lambi kahani shuru karein aap-abh PG per dobara aa hi gaye hein to 24 ghante aana zroori nahi he................kahani shuru karein main sabh ko bata duhn gi ke aap kis wajah se ghaib hein!

[u_r]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

dil kar ra so jaon nend aa re

to kalma parrho aur aankein band karro.kiya maloom subha aankh khulle bhi ke nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Masood]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

agger saans ka rishta toot gya to kissi na kissi trha khabar ho hi jai gi-thread lag jai ga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

magger jabh aap aise hi ghiab ho jaate hein na to waqai confusion hi confusion hoti he-ke kiyuhn ghib hehn aur kiya huwa.

aisa karehn lambi kahani shuru karein aap-abh PG per dobara aa hi gaye hein to 24 ghante aana zroori nahi he................kahani shuru karein main sabh ko bata duhn gi ke aap kis wajah se ghaib hein!

per abhi likhney ko dil nahin maan raha na - abhi khanai mukammil nahin hui, kuchh abwaab abhi rehtey hain - aik do qiston ka intizaar karo - khanai mukammil ho gi to zaroor likhoon ga..

[sarfraz_qamar]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

Dill kar raha hai,,,ab tak joo b ultt pulltt hoo gia hai,,,kafi hai..

Bakii din sahi guzzrrayyyy

[BhaTaktii RooH]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

sub k status or mood change karney ka dil kar raha hai...apni marzi k mutabiq...:esmile:

[wajid hanif]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

dil kar raha hai kay pak jaon...

[AbgeenA]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

filhal to dil kuch nahi kar raha siwaey dharakne k

[u_r]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

per abhi likhney ko dil nahin maan raha na - abhi khanai mukammil nahin hui, kuchh abwaab abhi rehtey hain - aik do qiston ka intizaar karo - khanai mukammil ho gi to zaroor likhoon ga..

safaid jhoot....ooper 16123 number waali apni post dekhen...khudi to kaha tha aap ne ke dil kar raha he....phir chand hi mint mein kese muker gya!!!!!!!

[u_r]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

filhal to dil kuch nahi kar raha siwaey dharakne k

wese aap ka dil kabhi kabhar darakna bhool bhi jaata he kiya???

[crystal_thinking]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

nend aa re tu sonay ka dil hy

[sarfraz_qamar]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

neend naii aa rahii abii jagnnay koo dill kar raha haii

[crystal_thinking]

Re: is waqt aap ka kia dil ker raha he

neend naii aa rahii abii jagnnay koo dill kar raha haii

nend q aa re nai????