~miss Call ~ From Asad

[shahbaznk]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

yeh tou naraazgii wali baat hai na muftiii jiiii?

[ASAD]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

aaj guzar gaya wo bari khamoshi se
kiya kart tha jo mujh se sawaal aksar

ye kaysa hy asad to kaya samjhta hy to akila hi shair hy yahaan:hathora

Shaire mey jo koe muj sey muqabla kary
kia karta hon os ka bura haal aksar

[Wafa]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

HAN HAN AB AAP NAHEEN ZAMANA KAHAY GA
AAP BHOOL JATI HAIN APNA KALAM AKSAR:a stick:

Aap ko galat fehmi hoi hai.mughe lagta hai aap ki yaadast kamzoor ho gae hai ,ja ke apna elaj karwae :zuban:

[sheem]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

:khi: sahi hai ji

bohat achi likhi hai aap ne :phool:

[aabi2cool]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

Shaire mey jo koe muj sey muqabla kary
kia karta hon os ka bura haal aksar

Tujhy shairee se kaya matlab ay tifly nadaan
tum kiya karo safai hathoon main ly k roomaal aksar
Meri har baat hy nirali mera her shouq hy nirala
dety hain mujh ko daad log keh k bakamaal aksar

[ASAD]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

AABI is tara tumy araam nahe aya ga. tumary naam pe aik alyda guzal likhoon gaa phir tumy shaid kuch afaqa ho

[aabi2cool]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

AABI is tara tumy araam nahe aya ga. tumary naam pe aik alyda guzal likhoon gaa phir tumy shaid kuch afaqa ho

aby ja meydan chor kar bhag nikly ho

[ASAD]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

aby ja meydan chor kar bhag nikly ho

:na: na na :na: OO kee keh rey too .. na na :na:
ay gal dobara ne karne ......:na: Tumy thora sa muqa kia dey dia tum to free he ho gya ho aabi2 fool :hathora aabi2fool :hathora

[shahbaznk]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

Tujhy shairee se kaya matlab ay tifly nadaan
tum kiya karo safai hathoon main ly k roomaal aksar
Meri har baat hy nirali mera her shouq hy nirala
dety hain mujh ko daad log keh k bakamaal aksar

Aaaabii ko jo kaho koi Kaaam aaap .
Talash karta rehta hai apni Ainak Aksar

[ASAD]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

Aaaabii ko jo kaho koi Kaaam aaap .
Talash karta rehta hai apni Ainak Aksar

jee oo shahbaz.. shyr ka kafia to nae mila.. lakin aabi ke biztee ho gae hay

[shahbaznk]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

sher ka Kafia milay na milay
Maqsad porra hota hai Aksar

[aabi2cool]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

Aaaabii ko jo kaho koi Kaaam aaap .
Talash karta rehta hai apni Ainak Aksar

apna to bina aynak bhi chal jata hy kaam ay shahbaz
tu to aynak laga kar bhi phira karta hy pareshaan aksar
yon to pehly bhi teri bongiyan kuhch kam na theen.
ab to tery ghar waly bhi rehny lagy hain pershaan aksar

[aabi2cool]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

jee oo shahbaz.. shyr ka kafia to nae mila.. lakin aabi ke biztee ho gae hay

han han tu to ab yonhi kahy ga beta tery dany jo muk gay hain.

[ASAD]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

han han tu to ab yonhi kahy ga beta tery dany jo muk gay hain.

Thora sa sabar kr loo bachoo... tumay ziada dayr tak izat raas nahe atee..... tumara kuch karna paray gaa..

[*Hala*]

Re: ~miss Call ~ From Asad

salaam PIYARA DOSTOO.. Yeh MARE apne poetry hy. mujy batana k kase lage ap ko ? :thmbup:

loolz ... kia bataana zaroori hai :hhh:

































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